Chapter 78

The gods liked a laugh.

Black House’s location just outside the Collegium had once been a subtle slight by the Lords Rector but it had now become the reason the Watch headquarters in Tratheke hadn’t dropped in a hole. It had suffered attacks, but besides some broken windows and doors there was hardly a mark on Black House while most of the city’s heart was gone, disappeared into the dark below.

Tristan had read the reports, and despite how much worse it had seemed in the moment the corpse-god had only shattered about third of the Collegium grounds while breaking out. But, as was to be expected of a gaping hole in the ground over a cavern, the sinkhole had then continued to widen. Five days had passed, but word had it that this morning a street had still fallen with hardly any warning.

Not that he’d gotten to see any of it. He’d been unconscious the better part of a day after his little jaunt across the void, and woken up blind after – and with Fortuna nowhere in sight. That’d not even been the worst of it, for Song and Angharad had needed to pull out his fingernails. The odd nacre they had turned into was fusing with his flesh, turning into something like claws. As for the locks of his hair that had turned into solid gold, cutting them off had not been difficult.

Only a streak of his hair had then turned golden, and no number of dye bottles or haircuts could change that. A dangerous thing, for a thief to have such a recognizable mark.

He’d still been blind when their day and a half as ‘guests’ of the palace ended, but at least he could dimly make out Fortuna’s words by then. He’d been better off than Maryam, anyway, who only emerged from her feverish slumber to erupt in fits of screaming mania.  When they were finally allowed back in the city the Thirteenth was whisked away by the Watch, shoved into a carriage that’d rolled down one of the few streets still connecting Fort Archelean to the city and then kept inside Black House.

Endless hours of debriefing ensued as the senior officers in the capital tried to get a handle on what exactly had happened and, once it was established it shouldn’t cost them anything, what they could get out of Asphodel for it. At least by the third day he could see again – and see Fortuna as well – while Maryam only woke up groggy instead of screaming. Lieutenant Mitra had assured them she would live, though she would need to purge herself regularly until she could return to Scholomance – where a ritual would stabilize her for good.

Tristan almost envied her the sleep for everyone wanted a piece of them, of what they had done, and that meant his waking hours were swallowed up by the demands of diplomats. Captain Wen, thankfully, proved a bulwark against Brigadier Chilaca’s wildest ideas as well their main source of news about what was going on in the city.

“The civil war’s been averted,” Wen told them as early as the fourth day. “Apollonia Floros being held prisoner cut the grass under the feet of the ministers. The valley nobles rushed to reinforce Palliades and together with the lictors they were able to take back the Lordsport this morning.”

Asphodel’s largest port had until then been in the hands of the rebel magnates who, after two thirds of their fighting men died either storming Fort Archelean or from the god’s rising, retreated to the Lordsport and seized it from the men of House Cordyles. They’d dug in, perhaps hoping for reinforcements or relief by foreign allies, but the Lord Rector had put an end to that.

It’d only been a matter of time, Tristan knew. The Lordsport wasn’t meant to be held against a force coming from the capital, its defenses were pointed at the sea.

“What happened to the rebels?” he asked.

“They refused the terms of surrender offered,” Wen said. “No quarter was given.”

His jaw clenched. Ming and Dandan had been mercenaries, in the end. Their death was fair, as much as any death was fair. But the others… the Kassa traveling men, Damon from the warehouse. Phoebe and Pollos, even Rhea. Had any of them made it out? He hoped so. Some must have thrown down their arms and faded back into the streets instead of letting themselves be talked into marching on the Lordsport.

But he knew, deep down, that most of them would be dead. All because the magnates had thought they should be the wealthy men ruling over the commons instead of the other set. It had been the Ecclesiast behind it all, Tristan tried to tell himself, but it rang hollow. The Ecclesiast had used the rebellion but it was the magnates who’d schemed it. No one had been to benefit from it besides those rich merchants, and now no one at all was to gain – not even them.

The only thing worse than a victorious revolution was a failed one.

“And the Cordyles flotilla?” Angharad asked.

“The remaining ships were last seen sacking fishing villages on the eastern coast,” Captain Wen said. “Our best guess is they’re gathering supplies before turning pirate.”

It was maddening, being stuck inside Black House while the capital was still a smoking wreck one wrong step away from riots, but Tristan admitted to himself it might be for the best. From his temporary seat in the southeastern ward Evander Palliades had overseen the reclamation of Tratheke and the Lordsport, and the moment he had them he began cleaning house.

And he wasn’t half-hearted about it, either.

Gallows and a headsman’s block were raised in the southwestern ward, fed a steady supply of corpses at every hour of the day and night while crowds came to jeer at the hated traitors, eventually growing bored enough with the spectacle that they only showed up when the death of a well-known name was announced in advance by the lictors.

Cultists and the leading figures of the traitor lictors hanged, while the rebel magnates and nobles were beheaded. For those latter types, death was far from the worse of it: word in the street was that Palliades had confiscated so much property from the families he’d be able to rebuild Tratheke twice if he sold it.

More quietly, the rank-and-file of both rebellions were put in irons until they could be sent off to their new fate – rowers in the Lord Rector’s galleys or working in the mines of Arke. Ten-year sentences, which in either case would be a death sentence for most of them. Galleymen were treated like slaves by most captains and Tristan had never known a mine that did not take a kickback of corpses in exchange for yielding its wealth.

Only a few souls were spared the axe and the noose, their fates up in the air until the grand ceremony Evander Palliades had announced at the week’s end – a celebration of the heroes of the ‘Three Risings’, where honors were to be distributed and the debatable notion of Palliades being victorious hammered in until there could be no more argument. Until that day Lady Apollonia Floros, Ambassador Gule and Lord Cleon Eirenos, as well as most of fence-sitting nobles who’d joined the rebellion at the last moment, were being held in Fort Archelean.

“Think he’ll kill Floros?” he asked Song on one of her rare breaks.

It had not escaped the Thirteenth’s notice that, despite opportunities otherwise, the Lord Rector had not met her in person since that long night. Even so she likely understood the man better than anyone else in black.

“I don’t know,” Song admitted. “It would be best for House Palliades if he did, else her descendants might rise to challenge his, but he won’t want to.”

“Her name’s being dragged through the mud,” Tristan noted. “That might neuter her enough for sparing.”

The people’s understanding of the Three Risings had been rather more unflattering to the rebels than the truth. The most popular story out there was that Apollonia Floros and Maria Anastos – the most powerful of the provably involved magnates – had been offered rule of Asphodel by the mad god known as the ‘Newborn’, some ancient deity of death and madness. The rebels had conspired to free it from its prison, only to turn on each other when they succeeded.

The use of the name ‘Newborn’ would have been a hint as to the source even if the temples of Oduromai weren’t outright preaching the tale. Not that the Lord Rector had wasted any time in sending men out to further vilify the rebels while praising how the loyal lictors and Watch agents had put down the Newborn.

Not that there’d been a need to tell the city of the latter. Apparently half of Tratheke had seen Maryam slay the Newborn, which had in a night’s span turned her into the most famous woman in the capital. That might well be true of the entire country by year’s end.

“Much depends on how strong he believes his position is,” Song finally said. “The western nobles fell in line, but the east is still being difficult – simply because they haven’t proclaimed a Lord Rector of their own does not mean they won’t.”

Tristan figured that the last thing Asphodel needed was a civil war, but it might not be beyond some ambitious fools to hear of the ravaging of Tratheke and the damages on the Lordsport then decide these meant the Palliades had grown weak enough to overthrow. They might not even be wrong, he grimly thought. The Collegium had not been as densely peopled as the southern wards, but losing such a large chunk the capital’s inhabited grounds had still meant the death of thousands.

Casualties were still difficult to assess, Wen had told them, because with entire neighborhoods gone it was hard to get an accurate tally. Tratheke was said to hold as many as eighty thousand souls within its walls and Tristan would not be surprised if a tenth of those souls had died to either the fighting or the sinkhole. A blow like that would take decades to recover from.

Either way, that was the business of Asphodel and little of his. Tristan soon found that he had the most free time of the Thirteenth, for even now that the interrogation was largely over Song and Angharad kept getting dragged back into officer meetings so they could contribute their ‘perspective’. Maryam and Hooks were still sleeping two thirds of their days away, and according to Lieutenant Mitra would for some time yet. The fever had lowered, and she no longer sweated through her sheets when he sat by her bedside.

Mitra had called what the sisters did ‘surgery by tooth and bludgeon’, sounding fascinated, which had Tristan firmly insisting that the Khaimovs obey their instructions of bed rest when they woke and demanded to be taken up the roof to have a look at the city. He even went as far as crossing the line by enlisting Song, which they rightfully treated as a heinous betrayal. Their captain was perfectioning her disappointed stare, which had already been a formidable thing.

Thankfully, he had something to while away the hours while the sister slept.

The rooms were in the guest wing of Black House, which while larger and nicer than what was reserved for lower officers also happened to be isolated from the rest of the grounds. And while the door itself was locked there was no guard at the door, because it was being kept quiet that the survivors of the Nineteenth Brigade had been put under house arrest.

Tristan began with the room to the left, rapping his knuckles against it.

“Are you decent?”

A moment, then there was a sigh.

“Again?”

“Again,” Tristan agreed.

“I am,” Cressida Barboza said in the tone of someone being marched to the gallows.

“That’d be-”

“- a first,” Cressida said with him, mimicking his voice in a high-pitched tone. “Die. That wasn’t even funny the first time.”

“That’s why it keeps getting funnier every time I do it,” Tristan happily replied.

And she’d learned that unless she went along with the joke, he would walk away and leave her to her boredom. The thief fished out the key he’d borrowed from the serving staff – which they would eventually realize had gone missing – and unlocked the door, waiting a beat before he opened it. Cressida was seated in a padded armchair like a brooding tyrant, wearing a coat and frilly green dressing gown which, along with the bare feet, had likely been meant to shock him at first.

After the sight failed to elicit embarrassment or raging lust – hah! – in him, he suspected she’d kept it up out of laziness. Her entire room was the kind of disorderly that would set Song twitching: bed unmade, clothes all over the floor, a half-eaten plate on the table with a book next to it. Her poison bag was open and several vials on the shelf. Tristan had been mentally marking the heights, and they kept slightly lowering every day.

She was liver-tempering, taking a little poison every day so her body would grow immune.

“Why do you darken my doorstep, Abrascal?” she sneered.

He brought up the first of the packages he carried, a cloth-wrapped book, and her eyes lit up. She then mastered her enthusiasm, raising her nose.

“Leave it on the table,” she said.

“It’s a nice book. I’m not leaving it next to…” Tristan paused, took a sniff. “Day-old pork and rice.”

“The Tianxi’s really getting to you, huh,” Cressida amusedly said.

He pointedly set down the book on her commode, ignoring the undergarments and chest wrappings adorning it.

“If she learns I enabled someone to spill sauce on an atlas that old, she may have me shot,” Tristan replied.

Finally doing away with the posturing, Cressida rose and padded across the room to take the cloth off the book. She quickly paged through the beginning, then stopped when she found – he leaned over to take a look, glimpsing what looked like a stretch of the Meridian Road. Interesting, that. The grand imperial highway linking Sacromonte to the obscured heart of Old Liergan was of interest to many, font of wealth that it was, but it was so well-policed by the Six that the Watch presence on it was supposedly quite limited. Mind you, that was the version that the Six put out. It might be worth asking the Watch what the real numbers were. Cressida snapped the book shut before he could get a better look.

“I would thank you,” she said, “but as always that production at the start burnt the gratitude out of me.”

“A mightily short candle, that gratitude,” he drawled.

Her eyes dipped to his other package and she leaned in, sniffing.

“Honeycakes?”

“Not for you,” he chided.

She tried glaring, but when his brow only rose in answer she retreated back to her armchair. She crossed her legs, then her arms, and looked exasperated for some reason.

“What did I do now?” he asked.

“You’re really not interested in the slightest, are you?” she sighed.

Ah, so the leg-crossing had been showing her bare legs on purpose. Why? Tristan cocked his head to the side.

“You’re trying to sleep with me to incite sentimentality,” he said.

“That and there’s worse ways to pass the time,” she said. “But I can take a hint.”

Why was only half the answer, he decided. Why now? Ah. It took a moment to parse through the possible suspects.

“Tupoc visited you,” he said.

“This lock does not hold me unless I let it,” Cressida acknowledged. “He had interesting things to say.”

Including, no doubt, that Hage had arrived at Black House late last night. Which meant the fate of the Nineteenth was about to be settled for good.

“He offered you a place in the Fourth?” Tristan asked, genuinely curious.

For a moment she looked as if she was weighing the price she should ask for, before deciding her bargaining position was not strong enough for that.

“If I live to return to Tolomontera,” she said. “He wants to fill his brigade back up to four.”

The Fourth Brigade was looking rather dented, at the moment, with both Acceptable Losses and Velaphi dead. Add to that how Alejandra Torrero’s forearm had needed amputation and it was only natural he would seek to bolster his numbers.

“If your involvement with the Ivory Library remains quiet, you could have better prospects,” he noted.

“Are you offering?” she said, batting her eyes.

He snorted back, hiding his genuine opinion on the prospect. Namely that Maryam would surely kill her, a thought that was not unfond.

“No, I thought not,” Cressida said. “It’s not me you’re eyeing.”

Tristan shrugged. Seeing he would give her nothing more, she pressed on.

“He seems a decent commander, and this way I am spared taking another test,” she said.

The Nineteenth’s contract had been marked as unfulfilled by the Lord Rector’s office, to his amusement. The Eleventh and the Thirteenth had joined the Fourth as marked fulfilled on what he figured was a collection of technicalities and the horrible look it would be for Evander Palliades to turn on the blackcloaks after they’d saved his city.

“But it all rests on my living through the month.”

The implied question hung heavy between them. Tristan kept his face calm, leaning back against the commode.

“Why?” he asked.

To her honor, she did not pretend to misunderstand what he was asking.

“The money,” Cressida frankly said. “And the potential to milk Tozi for favors if she rose high enough she was able to pull on family connections again.”

He’d ask her why she wanted the money, but they both knew she’d lie.

“Convince me you’re not going to be a problem,” Tristan said, crossing his arms.

“I will be the first suspect in anything happening to you from now on,” she said. “It would be in my best interest to warn and help you against foes to avoid having fingers pointed at me.”

“I’d have leverage over you,” Tristan said. “Which is power. But it would also mean I have leverage over you.”

Something that, in their common trade, was traditionally remedied by cutting a throat and burning the evidence.

“It’s not leverage I can remove,” Cressida pointed out. “Assuming you go to Hage with the deal Tozi originally took, the Krypteia still has knowledge of my indiscretion. It’ll be in my files. As long as you don’t use it to constantly twist my arm, I don’t achieve anything all that useful by killing you.”

Which was, Tristan would concede, a fair point. One he had considered himself, but that she would think of it without him offering so much as a hint made it twice as salient.

“You don’t regret anything,” he finally said.

Her brow rose, but those brown eyes stayed calm.

“I regret incorrectly assessing the situation,” Cressida Barboza. “Your caliber and Tozi’s. How far the others would push after encountering failure, the strength of the Ivory Library’s grip on them. I regret plenty, Tristan.”

Just not what I wanted you to regret, he thought. Nothing about the act of selling him like cattle sparked unease in her. That would make her a fine Mask, after loyalty in the Watch was branded on her back. It just made her someone he could never, ever trust. He made himself breathe out.

“I liked you, when we first met,” Tristan told her.

She looked startled.

“I liked you as well,” Cressida said, then reluctantly added. “You are not the worst company.”

“That fondness made if feel personal when you turned on me,” he said.

A fleck of something like pity passed in her eyes. For his naivety, his sentimentality? Before she could decide on her answer, he pushed himself off the commode.

“But it wasn’t, on your end,” Tristan said. “Only business.”

“I am glad you can see that,” she said in a guarded tone.

Looking for a trap. There wasn’t. He wondered if he could see the pity in his eyes, at the world she had chosen to live in. One built entirely on transaction, on gain and loss. The Law of Rats stripped of even its meager kindnesses. A rat waited to be cornered, before biting. Only cats hunted for sport. Cressida Barboza would make a better Mask than he, Tristan suspected. Or at least one better suited to many of the black works ahead.

But, at the end of the day, Tristan would rather have nightmares than live one.

“I’ll see you around, Cressida,” he said.

She only called out when his hand reached the door.

“What will you do?” the Mask asked.

He paused.

“I have no reason to answer you,” the Mask replied.

He closed the door behind him, locked it. It felt like too large and too thin a barrier all at once.

Tristan blinked as he saw the hallway – or rather, didn’t, for the world had gone black and… he breathed out when his vision swam, black turning to gray as he found someone leaning against the wall. Fanning herself with some ostentatious thing made of peacock feathers was Fortuna.

It still happened, sometimes, that when she focused her attention on him the world become eerily similar to what he’d seen that night. Black and white and gray, and he just knew that if he pulled deep enough he’d be able to see the – putting a hand on the wall to hold himself up, Tristan pushed down the nausea. Fuck. Even eyes closed it spun, there was nothing to do but wait it out.

Fortuna squeezed his arm in affection, waiting with him in silence until the worse had passed. He opened his eyes to an entirely normal hallway, save for the goddess standing in it. She had put away the Asphodelian dress for one rather similar to Tredegar’s on the night of the Three Risings, though naturally in scarlet. She’d even worn a saber at her hip, before his profuse and continued mockery forced her to cease.

“She likes you more than she let on, that girl,” Fortuna said.

Her guess, or divine insight? The former, he wagered. Fortuna, despite what he had glimpsed when she rode his soul, did not strike him as overly burdened with the latter. Tristan shrugged.

“It doesn’t matter,” he said.

A cat would be a cat, and that was all there was to it. Trust was rarer than gold, so it ought to be spent even more prudently. There were more deserving souls than Cressida Barboza, who he must admit did not disappoint because of who she was so much as because she was not who he would have liked her to be. In the end, he was the source of his own disappointment.

Fortuna sighed, angling down her fan.

“You should go bicker with Maryam,” she advised. “Her sister does funny things with soup.”

Like throwing it at him.

“After,” he muttered, eyeing the other door.

Fortuna hummed.

“Well, he’s fine too.”

His brow rose.

“You approve?”

“He sent me a prayer of thanks for saving all of Asphodel,” she preened. “Clearly he is a most discerning young man.”

He rolled his eyes at her. Tristan had expected change, after that lunatic stroll they took together. How could he not, when he had come so close to sainthood? He still had the physical marks of the beginning changes, put away in an iron box. And there had been other changes.

Tristan had a feel for it now, the way her power coursed through him all the time. Not in a way that would let him pull on it for a trick, but he focused he could feel the… tides in the odds, so to speak. When a situation became more and more unusual. Yet Fortuna herself had not become any different. It was only to be expected, since the nature of gods could not truly change, but some part of him had…

Well, it didn’t matter. If the sole difference in her speeches was that she now talked about prayers and added a duty to build her a peerless temple to her list of wild demands he could live with it. And if some part of him suspected that this was just the beginning, that the one thing in his life he could always count on had been irremediably changed, then he could dismiss that as fear talking.

He hoped.

“We’ll see,” Tristan replied.

He paused, then rolled his eyes at her again just to be sure she saw. Ignoring her offended squawking, he knocked on Izel Coyac’s door. A muted ‘come in’ reached his ears, so he did. Izel’s room had much the same layout as Cressida’s, save that it had a window at the back – though one that could not be opened higher than a thumb’s height. How both treated the area, though, stood in stark contrast.

Izel had his clothes folded on the shelf in neat piles, while the rest of his affairs were so cleanly put away Tristan would have thought no one inhabited the room. The sole touch of disorder was around the writing desk, over which he was currently bending. A chest full of small metal parts lay open, and several leather sheaths full of tools that went from simple to outlandish. Izel himself was staring down at the insides of a small bronze case through a handheld magnifying lens, delicately adjusting something with small pincers.

“Sit,” the tinker said without turning. “I am almost done.”

Tristan hopped onto his commode, which unlike the last was mercifully free of chest wrappings. Izel, tongue peeking out the corner of his mouth, pushed something into place that let out a small click and he straightened with a pleased look.

“Now, if I am not mistaken-”

He withdrew the pincers and closed the case, pressing on the button atop it. The quiet but audible sound of ticking needles was heard. Tristan’s eyes widened, for he had not recognized the piece from a distance.

“Already?” he asked.

The Izcalli put down the handheld magnifying glass and turned a smile on him, eyes ringed.

“I may have stayed up late,” Izel admitted. “It is a fascinating work – it is rare for Lierganen gearwork to impress me, but the artisan who made this was highly skilled. Vanesa, you said the name was?”

Tristan swallowed.

“Vanesa of Sacromonte,” he quietly agreed.

“I do not have the tools or pieces to replace the glass here,” Izel said, tapping the surface of the casing, “but the clockwork has been fixed and I should have the face in working order by evening’s end.”

His fingers clenched.

“Thank you,” Tristan said.

Izel dismissed the words with a wave.

“Any halfway decent tinker in Port Allazei could do the same,” he said, then grimaced. “Besides, I was a contributor to its wrecking. It is the least I can do.”

The least he could would have cost Tristan a tidy sum of gold coming from anyone else, the thief thought. There was a reason he had accepted, despite his misgivings, when Izel heard him carrying the scraps in a pouch and spontaneously offered.

“It wasn’t,” Tristan disagreed, “but hopefully this can serve as something of a salary.”

He produced a wrapped cloth, his second, and rose to offer it to Izel – who hastily rose to meet him halfway. The tinker tore open the wrapping and practically inhaled one of the three honeycakes, letting out a moan that had Tristan suppressing a snicker.

“Howw are theshe sho good?” Izel uttered, through a mouthful.

Tristan did not actually like them all that much, but it was always good for a laugh to watch the Izcalli massacre a plate of these. Izel swallowed, reaching for a second, then stopped himself.

“No,” he muttered. “Make them last.”

He put the pastries down on the desk.

“On the other hand,” Izel said, “it’d be a waste not to eat them while they’re still warm.”

So disappeared half of another honeycake, though Izel then guiltily glanced his way and set down the other half. He coughed into his fist.

“Would you like some?” the Izcalli reluctantly offered.

“Well,” Tristan smiled, “if you’re offering…”

He let them man despair for a good three seconds before sparing him. They chatted, for Izel was in a fine mood despite being under arrest. He was, Tristan suspected, relieved all the business with the Ivory Library was finally out of his hands.

“How is Cressida?” Izel finally asked.

“As she ever is,” Tristan replied.

He grimaced.

“She grows on you,” Izel assured him. “It just takes a while for her to pull the thorns.”

“That may be,” Tristan politely replied.

He cocked an eyebrow.

“Had any visitors since we last spoke?”

“Someone – I assume Xical – passed by this morning to slip an eerily well-inked depiction of me getting drawn and quartered under the door,” Izel shared.

Tristan closed his eyes and, with much effort, did not actually laugh.

“Bait is apparently a fine drawing hand,” he got out.

“That would explain it,” Izel drawled. “I’m guessing a senior Mask has arrived?”

“Officer Hage,” Tristan said. “Late last night.”

Izel nodded.

“I’ve already prepared my confession, though I expect we’ll be interrogated nonetheless,” he said.

Tristan eyed him, watching for deceit.

“I offered Tozi a deal,” he idly said.

Izel snorted.

“And then she tried to kill you,” he said. “By most standards, Tristan, that is considered declining the terms offered.”

“And for that, you killed her,” Tristan said. “Arguably you held up your end.”

Izel leaned back into his seat.

“It’s not that I don’t understand what you’re offering, Tristan,” he said. “But I’m not interested in buying a pardon with anyone’s blood, not even Tozi’s. That is the very sort of thinking that led me to obeying the Ivory Library in the first place.”

He gritted his teeth.

“It’s the very sort of thinking I enlisted to leave behind,” Izel said. “But then when you fear something you bring it with you everywhere, don’t you? My father told me that, once. And he is many things, but a fool is not one of them.”

“Confessing,” Tristan said, “will see you placed in Krypteia custody. Assuming you are not sold back to your enemies in Izcalli, you would be assigned to some dangerous wasteland at the edge of the world.”

Possibly Hell. Or the Someshwar’s border with the Desolation, which some argued was worse.

“I took oaths when I enlisted,” Izel gently said. “There is no arguing that I broke them.”

The thief hummed.

“I don’t care about the oaths,” he said.

Izel blinked.

“I, uh,” he said. “That is your prerogative.”

“It is,” Tristan agreed. “I am irked, Izel, because you are forgetting the most important part.”

“I am?”

“Indeed,” he nodded. “The Watch will get its due either way, but what about me? Am I not the most wounded party?”

Izel paused.

“I do not own much,” he said. “But once in custody I can will it to you to-”

“Paltry recompense,” Tristan said. “No, I’ll get my money’s worth out of you Coyac.”

He leaned in.

“Two years, at least.”

“I beg your pardon?” Izel said.

“Two years of tinker’s work,” Tristan said, then wagged his finger. “And don’t you think about shorting me on this. There’ll be no confession, else how are you to deliver?”

“Abrascal,” the other man said, tone disbelieving, “are you trying to bully me into joining the Thirteenth Brigade?”

Tristan smiled charmingly.

“That’s not important,” he said. “The real question is this-”

He leaned in, lowered his voice so Izel would have to do the same.

“Is it working?”

Izel’s face blanked for a moment, then he let out a startled laugh.

“It’s kind of you,” he said. “But your captain-”

Tristan reached into his pocket and slapped down the contents on the table. It was a folded paper.

“And this is?”

“Your transfer papers,” he said. “Signed by Captain Song Ren.”

Who had needed some talking into this, but less than he had figured would be needed. Izel had apparently tried to warn her of what was going on while they were both at Black House, which raised him in her esteem. The Izcalli paused.

“It would be trouble for you,” he said. “Khaimov detests me.”

“She holds you in contempt,” Tristan said, “because of what you did do.”

She was not a forgiving one, his Maryam. He rather liked it that way.

“She could set the contempt aside for the same reason,” he continued. “Unless, of course, scorn is too high a barrier for you to overcome.”

Izel swallowed.

“And Tredegar?”

“She’s developed something a sweet tooth for redemption, these days,” Tristan said. “Angharad Tredegar is not the kind of woman to look down on someone trying to do better.”

Not when she was still desperately trying to dig her way out of the trap she’d fallen into. That favor she’d asked of him was most revealing.

“It seems you’ve thought of everything,” Izel finally said.

There was a faint bitterness to the tone.

“I won’t force your hand,” Tristan said. “If you want to throw yourself on a pyre, Izel, I won’t stop you.”

He rose to his feet.

“But it won’t do me any good to watch you burn,” he said. “I don’t think it’d do anyone any good, really, except those you are inconvenient to. And I don’t consider myself one of them.”

He scanned Izel’s face, found it almost blank. The other man, he decided was not yet convinced.

“Think about it,” Tristan said. “Hage can wait.”

Izel did not answer until he was at the door.

“Why?”

Tristan turned, leaning his back against the door.

“Because you’re trying,” he quietly said. “Because you tried, because I think you’ll still be trying tomorrow. And the truth is I’ve done things I’m not proud of, Izel.”

His fingers tightened around the tile that wasn’t there.

“So I’d like to think that trying matters,” Tristan said.

And he left Izel Coyac to his silence. The door closed on the tinker’s heavy face, Tristan taking a breath to steady himself. The absence welcoming him was what gave it away.

Fortuna was not here, and there were only so many reasons she wouldn’t be.

“Walk with me.”

Hage’s face was expressionless, for the devil refrained from moving his shell into an expression. Tristan hid his unease and followed the old Mask, away from the guest wing. He did not bother to ask how much of that Hage had heard: devilkind had much finer senses than men, a door barely made a difference if they were close enough. The old devil led him through stairs and halls, Tristan making out their destination only a minute in, the gardens atop Black House. The view of the city, in the afternoon light, was a bleak one. A corpse with ragged hole in the chest.

Hage did not seem to mind, sitting on one of the benches. Tristan remained standing.

“So now I get to hear the verdict,” the thief said, forcing nonchalance.

“Consider this,” Hage said.

The devil waited a beat, folding his fingers.

“The Krypteia has, within the Watch, power and authority that in some ways trumps even that of the Conclave with little oversight but that which it consents to,” Hage said. “A Mask granted a commission by our own order has the right to order the detainment, interrogation and under some circumstances even the death of fellow watchmen with no consideration to rank or years of service. We are allowed to lie to our superiors, give false testimony before tribunals and with sufficient justification break most laws of the Watch.”

Hage’s eyes found him.

“How does one check such men, Tristan?” he asked.

“You can’t,” he said. “Not really.”

Because the first thing the Masks would do was compromise any branch of the Watch meant to check them.

“Which means the burden of checking the Krypteia rests on the shoulders of the Krypteia,” Hage said. “An enterprise doomed to failure, should the order be monolithic.”

“So the order’s fractured,” Tristan quietly said. “And some pieces are looking at the others instead of the enemy.”

He frowned.

“And you’re part of the section that…”

“Winnows out the unsuitable,” Hage evenly said.

He shivered at the matter-of-fact tone.

“It is not a fair or clean process, blowing out the chaff,” the devil said. “But it is necessary. Making such provisions significantly cut down on abuses of power after we implemented them across the Krypteia.”

“You kill anyone who looks like they could turn into a problem down the line,” Tristan said. “Gods. So if I’d killed the entire Nineteenth, even if I found a way that didn’t break Watch rules…”

“I would have snapped your neck,” Hage said, not shying away from the truth in the slightest.

Tristan could respect the honesty, if nothing else.

“And Cressida?” he asked.

“She has one strike on her account,” the devil said. “This will be made known to her.”

“But you won’t kill her,” Tristan slowly said, “because she was doing it for gold, and you think she’d do less damage if she went bad after climbing up the ranks.”

“Greed is manageable,” Hage said. “It can be burned out, with the proper lessons. The propensity to systematically murder apparent threats when feeling cornered is not so salvageable.”

Tristan’s jaw clenched.

“Why don’t I get a strike?”

“Because Nerei taught you too well,” the devil said. “You are a skilled enough liar to hide instability unless confronted with genuine pressure – that is one of the reasons Asher allowed the Ivory Library to hound you so. It is, indeed, why we sent the Nineteenth to Asphodel knowing they were being leveraged to move against you.”

Tristan forced himself to calm, to consider the angles. And there were only so many reasons for the Krypteia to take such a hard line with him from the start.

“Abuela’s a winnower as well, isn’t she?” he asked. “That’s why I don’t get a strike. Because you think she taught me to see through the usual tripwires.”

“She has done so with some of her previous apprentices,” Hage said. “We now handle her pupils with particular care.”

“Lucky me,” Tristan bitterly said.

“Do not think yourself unique,” the devil said. “Did you think something like Scholomance, where students are initiated into the covenants holding our greatest secrets as a matter of fact instead of after years of observation, would ever be tolerated by the Krypteia without thorough vetting of those involved?”

He breathed in sharply.

“I’m not the only one getting tested,” Tristan said.

And didn’t that explain quite a few things?

“You will all be tested at one time or another,” Hage easily said. “But you, at least, have answered a question for me.”

“And what would that be?” Tristan asked.

“Is there anything of you that would not fit under the mask?” Hage said.

He swallowed.

“Is there?”

And the devil smiled, teeth and teeth and teeth as far as the eye could see.

“There are few among my kind who are my elder, Tristan,” Hage said. “Some argue that makes me of a different breed but I am a devil still, and always will be. All cages can be broken save that of my own nature.”

Silence held.

“But we try,” Hage softly said. “We do. And I’d like to think it matters, just the same as you.”

 —

It had been a deliberate choice to have the ceremony on the edge of the Collegium, at the newly named Victory Square.

It’d once been a sprawling garden adjoining a row of expensive shops but the sinkhole had eaten a third of the garden, much of the rest sliding into the dark over the following days, and most the shops had burned down. Instead the space had become a large plaza of sorts, about the length of a street and made broader by bringing down some the remaining buildings. Thousands could squeeze in there now and as many in the adjoining streets, but as far as Song was concerned the impressive part was the wooden terrasse overlooking the square.

The brass framework delineating the Collegium, which had once held up its enormous panels of glass, had been used anew. The frame was thoroughly scaffolded so a tall wooden platform could be raised to tower over the gathered crowd in the square. A temporary structure, though Song suspected in time it would be turned into something more permanent. Regardless, its very existence was meant to be a statement: Tratheke might have been wounded, but from that injury the people of Asphodel could build new wonders.

Evander was not content with merely solidifying the position of House Palliades, he was seeding hope for the years to come.

“I found him. Second level, third room from the left.”

Song tore her gaze away from the square, turning to Tristan. The door to the balcony she was standing on had been left open and his footsteps were quiet, so she’d had no notion of his return. The Mask, despite her best efforts, still looked inexplicably wrinkled even wearing a freshly pressed formal uniform. The Malani tricorn he’d insisted on wearing against all advice was tucked under his arm.

“Guards?” Song asked.

“He wasn’t allowed to bring any in here,” Tristan said. “One attendant, currently making tea.”

Song’s brow rose. All of the guests of honor for the day’s ceremony were being hosted in what had once been a grand tailor’s shop, one of the capital’s finest dressmakers. Its large number of salons and fitting rooms, meant to receive wealthy patrons, had made it a natural fit to hold the souls the Lord Rector wanted to honor until it was time for them to join him on the terrasse.

What this shop didn’t have, though, was facilities to make tea. Had the ambassador’s attendant brought their own tea kettle? The thought seemed absurd.

“Then the only obstacle would be the lictors in the halls,” she said.

“They don’t seem to have instructions to stop us wandering around,” Tristan noted. “I asked Angharad to test the waters by visiting Lord Saon and they did not intervene.”

Song hummed. Angharad had mentioned getting along well with several of the younger scions of House Saon when she’d gone to the country, and along with House Pisenor those nobles had earned much acclaim by leading the charge in reinforcing the Lord Rector after the Three Risings. Given the… complicated position of House Eirenos at the moment and how House Iphine had been up to its neck in the ministerial coup, those two houses were poised to become the first of the valley lords.

Their presence at the ceremony meant that Evander recognized as much and wanted to publicly bind them to him. No doubt they’d each be tossed some of the Iphine lands as a reward while Evander kept the choicest cuts for House Palliades.

“Then I will head there directly,” Song made herself say.

“He locked his door,” Tristan said. “I’m guessing to avoid exactly that.”

Song’s lips thinned in anger. Then the gray-eyed man flourished his wrist with highly unnecessary theater, producing a small silver key.

“Alas,” Tristan smirked, “the lictors didn’t search the owner’s office when they commandeered this place. They didn’t find his private set of keys, which were helpfully numbered to match the doors.”

“I wonder if I should be concerned by the frequency at which I have begun to endorse your crimes,” Song noted, then inclined her head. “Thanks.”

“It’s nothing,” he dismissed. “I would probably have broken in out of curiosity anyhow.”

By which meant boredom, really, since Maryam was currently napping in the room behind them. A healthy precaution given that they would standing out there for at least half an hour and while her fever had broken she found it difficult to stay awake more than a few hours at a time, much less stand.

Song lightly touched his shoulder in thanks regardless, squaring her own before crossing the fitting room. She pretended not to hear Maryam’s snores resound from the sofa, Hooks curiously peeking out of her sister when she passed but not speaking in fear of waking her. Song nodded a goodbye, which was returned, and then she was out in the hall.

Nerves would not serve her, she reminded herself. Hand on the chisel.

There was a pair of lictors guarding the stairs but they said nothing as she passed. One was glaring, though – as was not infrequent from them these days. Word had spread of her drawing Evander down to the city on false pretenses, though opinions seemed split on whether she had done so to avoid his being nabbed by the coup or because she’d meant to sell him to the Yellow Earth before changing her mind at the last moment. You could tell who believed what from the dark looks easily enough.

There was another soldier upstairs, but she was on patrol. Song slowed her stride and let the lictor turn the corner before heading to the third door from the left. She slid in the key and turned, catching the surprise intake of breath within before she entered and closed the door behind her. The second floor did not have balconies, but it did have large windows of Tratheke glass, almost two thirds of a man’s height. They had been opened here, letting in the Glare, and Ambassador Guo stood before it as if framed by the light.

Tu Guo was a tall and stately man in his late fifties, whose mustache and long beard were deeply touched with gray. His old-fashioned hanfu was some of the most exquisite pieces of clothing Song had ever seen. It was not dripping in pearls and gold bangles, as was the fashion among the wealthy and tasteless. Instead every hem of the silken deep blue ensemble – jacket, skirts, the beizi overcoat – was embroidered with poetry in subtle silver thread. Even the hat he wore over his carefully styled hair, a black muslin cap with two oval flaps emerging from the sides, bore that same discreet mark.

Song recognized none of the writing, which likely meant he’d had one of the most fashionable poets of the Republics compose the verses for this very outfit. That, or he was confident enough in his own verses that he could use them without expecting mockery to ensue.

He was also looking rather displeased at her presence in this fitting room, which was not unexpected considering he had ignored even formal requests made through Brigadier Chilaca to meet with him. Not even the Thirteenth’s fine reputation on Asphodel was enough to make the likes of Song Ren someone a man in his position could afford to be acquainted with. A shame she would be forcing the matter. For him, anyway.

“Ambassador Guo,” she greeted in Cathayan.

She could see it in the way his face tensed ever so slightly, how he considered pretending not to see her before conceding to the reality that it would only make him look like a fool. Intelligent brown eyes were turned on her and the man inclined his head ever so slightly.

“Captain Song,” he said.

Captain Ren would have been a line too far, evidently, or even just using her full name.

“I have been meaning to speak with you, ambassador,” she smiled.

He did not smile back.

“I had heard this,” he said. “My duties of these last few weeks did not allow me time for private matters.”

“Duties?” she replied, cocking an eyebrow.

His face darkened. Tianxia had not covered itself in glory in this whole affair, which he well knew.

“As the Lord Rector of Asphodel was informed, captain, the embassy was unaware of this Ai’s evil plot,” he said. “While we acknowledge we have had contact with the local Yellow Earth sect in the past, it was then headed by a reasonable man – who was, we have since learned, murdered by this radical before she attempted this senseless violence.”

So they were pinning everything on Ai and hoping no one would find out the Asphodel sect had been in bed with this magnates’ uprising for years. Her brow rose even further.

“And the promises that this newborn ‘Republic of Asphodel’ would be supported by the fleets of Tianxia?”

“Lies, spoken by a crazed radical who sought to drag the Republics into war against the will of the people,” Ambassador Guo curtly said. “Tianxia has ever been a friend and ally to the Asphodel Rectorate, despite attempts by foreign powers to malign this fruitful relationship.”

Song idly wondered who was the foreign power most exploiting this blunder at the moment – was it Sacromonte, using it as a way to curtail Tianxi influence in what it still saw as its backyard, or the very Watch she served? It would be child’s play for Brigadier Chilaca to push for restrictions on the trade of aetheric engines with Tianxia after the Yellow Earth was caught backing a coup. The ambassador’s sole comfort must be that Malan was in an even worse position, since Ambassador Gule had been taken alive and revealed as a leading figure of the cult.

The tall man looked away.

“This unpleasant subject has put me in a black temper,” Ambassador Guo said. “You must allow me the time to compose myself before we are called to the ceremony.”

Ah, and she’d wondered why he even bothered to humor her implications. She could almost admire the politeness of that dismissal and how elegantly it had been brought about.

“It’s a shame our conversation must end,” she said. “Who can I then discuss with Ai’s confession that Hao Yu was murdered with your permission and, indeed, on your behalf?”

She shrugged.

“Brigadier Chilaca,” Song suggested. “Or perhaps the Lord Rector himself?”

The ambassador turned to face her fully for the first time, his face carved out of stone, the Glare at his back a burning halo.

“No,” Song mused. “Too small a company. Perhaps it should be shared with the crowd outside, when the Thirteenth Brigade accepts its honors?”

The man was a seasoned diplomat but he still had to suppress a twitch at that last one. For such a thing to come out would be a hard blow to Tianxia’s reputation in these parts, certainly, but that was not the reason why he feared it. Asphodel would demand reparations, likely backed by the Six, and the merchants of the Republics would lose very profitable trade until relations stabilized. But these would be consequences for Tianxia at large, and ultimately relatively minor ones.

For the ambassador himself, however, it would be an utter disaster.

“Hearsay,” Ambassador Guo said. “You would threaten me with a fanatic’s lies?”

“In the Watch, it is an enlisted officer’s right to refuse being subjected to interrogation under truth-telling contracts,” Song said. “It is a lesser-known fact that, for a fee, an officer can instead request to be placed under such a contract when making a report.”

She saw that sink in, the implicit threat.

“That you believe it the truth would not make it so,” the man curtly said.

“Does that really matter?” Song wondered. “The final report will still make it to Evander Palliades and to the Conclave. And where does that leave you, ambassador?”

He paled.

Because it wasn’t the strength of the Watch she was threatening him with, or even of Asphodel. If she made what she knew public then Tu Guo would be expelled from the island and the Watch would request him to be handed over for trial, but they both knew he would make it back safely to Tianxia regardless. The Republics would not suffer one of their diplomats to be ill-treated, or handed over to another great power for judgement.

But when Guo got back to the Republics, the moment he got off that ship he would cease being an ambassador and instead become a monumental embarrassment. A visible reminder of the greatest diplomatic debacle Tianxia had been involved in for several decades.

“The only real question left would be whether you will die in confinement at your ancestral shrine,” Song calmly said, “or if you will retire to the country where a sudden sickness will take you within the year.”

The older man studied her for a long moment. No longer dismissing her, for she had shown she would cut his throat if he did.

“If that was your intent, you would already have done so,” Tu Guo said. “You come to bargain.”

“I come to give terms,” Song corrected. “Take them or leave them.”

This was not a fish market, there would be no haggling.

“What,” the older man flatly said, “do you want?”

“You’re in bed with the Yellow Earth,” Song said.

He looked about to object but she raised a hand to cut him off.

“The exact nature of that relationship is of little interest to me,” she said. “I only care that it exists.”

And that he was influential enough his permission had been sought before abjuring the head of the Asphodel sect. That meant deeper ties than just the occasional information trading, which she suspected was as close as most diplomats actually got with the Yellow Earth.

“And what do you want of them?” Ambassador Guo asked.

“Why, I want to be their friend,” Song smiled. “The kind of friend who buries the true depths of their involvement in the coup – like, say, the existence of Tianxi mercenary artillerymen hired by the Yellow Earth who drilled the magnates’ forces – and in exchange gets her skeletons buried.”

He was not slow on the uptake.

“The royalist,” Ambassador Guo said.

She wondered whether he avoided saying her brother’s name out of distaste or prudence.

“I don’t believe that this knowledge needs spreading,” Song said. “Don’t you agree? Why, one might even say that it’s my trouble to handle and word on such matters is best sent to me in the future.”

She would not let herself be blindsided twice.

“I can contain such a rumor,” Ambassador Guo slowly said. “And even arrange, as a courtesy, for the right correspondence to reach you.”

He paused.

“I can do this, as a man of influence.”

As blunt a reminder as he could give that should she sell him out he’d be in no position to aid her. She thought it tasteful on his part that he had not bothered threatening retaliation against her family should she turn on him. They both understood the implicit give and take here, no need to be crude.

Song tilted her head to the side and smiled.

“Why, ambassador, would you ever be anything else?”

The older man looked away, back out the window.

“Tend to my face and I will tend to yours,” he finally said.

A bargain struck. Song inclined her head.

“I’ll be expecting your letter,” she said, inclining her head. “A pleasant afternoon to you, ambassador.”

He did not bid her goodbye, so in a matching spirit of pettiness she did not lock his door before leaving. Let his attendant wonder about that. Song returned to the Thirteenth’s room below, ignoring the stares of the lictors, and found Tristan gone while Angharad had returned. Maryam was still merrily snoring away.

She took to the balcony with her friend, idly discussing what she had learned visiting the Saon – that the Lord Rector was holding Cleon’s fate close to his chest, but none of the Eirenos lands had been promised to anyone else – and waste time as Victory Square began to fill in the distance. Song was able to predict when they would be fetched just by the look of the numbers, though it helped that her eyes were able to see a heavy detachment of lictor escorting Evander to the bottom of the terrasse.

Song had wondered how he would get himself heard by thousands spread over a large plaza and several outlying streets, and the answer proved of some interest: some sort of aetheric device in the form of a brass horn set over a spinning helix in a box. Had Izel Coyac been here he would have been most interested but the tinker, despite having joined them up in the palace, was yet a member of the Nineteenth Brigade and unlike the Fourth and Thirteenth it was not being honored today.

Song would not want him here, either, even if he had gone against the others at the end. She saw the sense in his joining the Thirteenth, but she would not pretend their beginnings had been anything but what they were.

Evander’s speech had already begun when the lictors came and their brigade was escorted out of the grand shop and to a cordon of soldiers keeping the crowd out of the way to the terrasse. The machine was magnifying Evander’s voice, casting it far and wide, but Song thought it also made him sound… granular, for lack of better word. And sometimes there was a hum and the syllables were stretched out, which made him seem less skilled an orator than he truly was.

“- for which there must be justice,” the Lord Rector was saying. “Lady Apollonia Floros, step forward.”

Song’s head whipped up, but the angle of the terrasse hid the sight from her. Even as they approached the scaffolding around the metal Floros spoke into the machine and confessed to having taken arms against the Lord Rector, though she denied having conspired with the cult. The Thirteenth waited at the bottom of the terrasse along with the Fourth Brigade, equally in their formal uniform best. Tupoc looked unusually serious, while Bait looked like he wanted to sink into his own cape and Alejandra was visibly doped – as she ought to be, having lost her arm most of the way to the elbow.

They waited under the eye of the soldiers as Evander took the lead again and announced Apollonia Floros’ fate.

“-given her long years of service and her love of the Rectorate, Lady Floros will redeem her misdeeds in service of the people of Asphodel,” Evander said. “Passing all titles and lands in trust to the throne, she will be taking service in the Watch at the fortress of Stheno’s Peak.”

Cleverly done, Song thought. Floros was still popular enough that executing her would result in troubles out east, but tying her to what was widely considered a foreign power would put to torch to her support. Meanwhile it was also a bribe to the Watch, who would get to use a leading noble of Asphodel as the face of any expansion effort on the isle.

And, should Lady Floros desert, the Watch would have incentive to kill promptly her lest its reputation be tarnished.

“A bold play by Lady Floros,” Angharad noted.

“Enlisting?” Tristan asked.

“No, passing her holdings in trust to the throne,” she said. “She effectively ceded the disposal of her succession to the Lord Rector. He could take every scrap of Floros land and be well within his rights.”

“But he won’t,” Song quietly said. “Because it would taint his reputation, when she so nobly stepped away to redeem herself. Instead he’ll take some holdings, distribute a few more and pass the rest to Lady Floros’ heir.”

She had a daughter and a son. Song could not recall which was the eldest.

“A bold play,” Angharad repeated. “And one that will most preserve the strength of her house, for if she had insisted on a traditional succession the Lord Rector may have felt forced to smother her house entirely lest they become a thorn in his side.”

She spoke entirely without condemnation of such a decision, a reminder that for all her virtues Angharad been raised as yiwu.  Apollonia Floros was sent down and the doling out of sentences continued. Maria Anastos, leading figure of the rebel magnates, was instead sent to the gallows and all Anastos properties and ships confiscated by the throne. She traded a look with Tristan at that, neither of them surprised. Ambassador Gule of Bezan was the second test of cunning for Evander, and there Song was not sure he walked the line as well.

Gule was expelled from Asphodel, a formal complaint made to Malan and he was returned to the Queen Perpetual as he was sent – he would, cruelly, be made deaf and crippled again. Angharad’s face tightened, for she had liked the man even knowing him a traitor. You would have gotten more out of the Malani leaving him untouched, Song thought. But then this might not be Evander’s own anger at work – he had supporters of his own to appease, who might have balked at Gule leaving Asphodel with barely a slap on the wrist after what he had done.

The fence-sitting nobles, of which Menander Drakos was the greatest, were inflicted fines and lost their Tratheke properties but otherwise were sent away with nothing but a stern look. A peace offering to nobles out east who might be worried of the cost of returning to the fold. It was Lord Cleon Eirenos that was the last of the punishments, paraded out with priests at his side.

“-though tricked by the rebels Lord Cleon turned his blade on them, valiantly contributing to the slaying of the Newborn, and for his noble deeds was blessed by Oduromai himself,” the Lord Rector recounted.

Cleon was trotted up to the machine. He reiterated oaths of fealty to the throne and swore to raise a temple to Oduromai King on his lands, whose stewardship he would offer to House Palliades. So a massive fine in all but name, paired with an excuse for the Lord Rector to keep soldiers near the Eirenos manor. It was surprisingly lenient, and Song wondered if Oduromai had intervened on his newest contractor’s behalf. That may well be, if the presence of his priesthood up there was any indication.

Then the talk shifted to rewards, and Song knew their time had come. The lictors gestured and the brigades began the climb, which was surprisingly safe – the scaffolding had floors of steady if narrow planks, and there were railings.

And when they rose to the top under the light of the Asphodel noon, lining up for the crowd to see, a roar that shook the very sky greeted them. It shook something loose in her, to have these thousands not jeering but cheering – for a Ren, gods. For a Ren. It caught in her throat and some part of her felt like weeping. She missed the first half of Evander’s speech, only stepping forward when prompted so she might be granted Asphodel’s golden rope, the highest honor that could be granted to a foreigner.

He avoided her gaze when he laid it around her neck.

All four of the Thirteenth received it, and Tupoc from the Fourth, but keeping the praise on a single brigade made for an easier story for the crowd and it was on the Thirteenth that Evander laid most the praise.

“-their unlikely courage was key,” he said, but the machine hummed, whirred.

It made a wobbling sound, sparking, and they all turned an alarmed look onto it. Song only realized what it’d done a heartbeat later, when the crowd began chanting. Unluckies, they shouted. Unluckies.

“Oh no,” she faintly said.

When he’d said unlikely the machine had hummed and the crowd thought he’d called them the… Unluckies? To her left Tristan was convulsing in silent laughter, which ought to be a crime. Neither Angharad nor Maryam seemed all that displeased either, which had her wanting to bite her nails. Who wanted to be known as unlucky?

Song thought that would be the end of their part, but when the chanting died down Maryam was asked to step forward again. She looked stunned, dazed, in the afternoon light.

“Warrant Officer Khaimov slew the old god and freed us from its would-be tyranny, and this deserves reward beyond mere honors,” Evander Palliades said, stepping forward.

He held up a golden scroll, which caught the light and shone for all the crowd to see.

“As Lord Rector of Asphodel, I grant her what no other soul in Vesper will be able to claim – a ship made in the ancient shipyards of our isle, the first and last skimmer that will be built there.”

And the crowd roared again as Maryam looked poleaxed. Song caught Evander looking at her, from the corner of his eye, before he wrenched his gaze away.

“It will be yours to name,” Evander quietly told Maryam. “And you will have safe haven in Asphodel so long as I rule here, this I swear. No matter who comes knocking.”

They were herded back down as the last of the address was given, Maryam holding her golden deed of ownership half in a trance – though not so much she did not slap Tristan’s fingers away when he reached for it. The lictors escorted them back to the shop, where they were to wait until the crowd dispersed to return to Black House.

But, a quarter hour after the end of the ceremony, when a captain came to fetch her out of the Thirteenth’s fitting room she was not surprised. She told her brigade to stand down when they protested and let herself be brought to one of the rooms.

Evander was already sitting on the other side of the table when she entered. In his formal address clothes, though he had undone some of the brass buttons and his jacket laid loose on him. At his silent invitation, she sat. They looked at each other for a long, trembling moment.

“You know,” Evander finally said, setting down his glasses, “I must have had this conversation a hundred times in my mind, over the last few days.”

His lips thinned.

“And yet now here I am, not a single one of my scathing phrases recalled. It is enough to drive a man mad.”

Song did not answer, for what could she say to that?

“I have never known you to be shy before,” he sharply said. “Have you grown mute, Song?”

She hesitated.

“I didn’t,” Song finally said. “Have this conversation in my mind, I mean.”

He looked stricken, for a moment.

“I could not, when I have no idea what to expect of you now,” she said, then grimaced. “Or rather I know what I should expect of you, but you do not act it.”

The addition put some life back into him, but not much. He passed a hand through his hair, looking exhausted.

“I do not know what to expect of myself, either,” Evander confessed. “You betrayed my trust, on the night of the Three Risings. You exploited my feelings to put me in danger for your own advantage.”

Song inclined her head, for there was no denying it.

“But then you saved my life, my throne and quite likely my kingdom,” he said. “And that ambush was not spur of the moment: you never intended to give me over to the Yellow Earth.”

Song shook her head.

“To face the Newborn was my duty as a watchwoman,” she said. “Not something meant as a boon to you.”

She paused.

“I always meant to kill Ai,” she said, confirming that part at least. “The original plan was not to put you in peril – she was to be slain while attacking the brothel, you were never to be in her presence.”

“Mitigation of a danger I would not have been in had you not drawn me into it,” Evander said.

“I do not argue otherwise,” Song quietly said. “I only mean to give the answers I owe you.”

His fists clenched.

“You could at least try to remind me of the debt I owe you,” he spat, “instead of just sitting there looking like a wounded bird.”

“I have said-”

“I know what you’ve said,” he cut in. “Duty. But duty does not rally the defense at the palace, rout the Ecclesiast and slay a god. You can call it what you want, the truth remains that had you not led brigades to fight I would be a corpse in the Newborn’s belly and Tratheke a mass grave.”

He breathed out shakily.

“A larger mass grave, anyway,” Evander said. “Gods.”

He clutched his head in his hands.

“More dead in a night than through the last three wars we fought,” he croaked out. “We hold together, barely, but the scars this will leave…”

“Scars will heal,” Song said. “And I know few souls would have better led Asphodel through this storm than you.”

He smiled bitterly.

“I suppose you’d think that,” he said. “The Watch got everything it wanted – it’ll be years before the shipyard can be put to work again, and the damages were significant.”

Song’s lips thinned. She had known that, for Brigadier Chilaca saw fit to share it. When the Newborn had broken out of his prison he had collapsed not only the ceiling of the cavern above him but the floor beneath, crashing tons of stone on the Antediluvian shipyard. Many in the underground town had died, and only the Watch revealing Menander Drakos’ secret path down to the shipyard had allowed any help to reach those below. Either way, with the lift leading down there now mostly scrapped metal it would be year of work and a colossal expense to get the shipyards anywhere near a working order.

“And even when they do, no more skimmers,” he said. “Only aetheric engines, and no more than one a year.”

That was not, they both knew, the true capacity of those shipyards even so diminished. But the great leverage the Watch had on Asphodel had made it the truth, and so it would remain for a very long time to come. Tianxia might be able to build war skimmers, using Asphodelian engines, but they would not rival proper First Empire warships and the build-up would take decades.

Long enough for Malan to prepare, for the balance between the great powers of Vesper to stay stable. Malan would lose power and Tianxia would gain some, but it would be a slow thing – no grand and sudden stroke, no desperate war. Arguably, the true winner in this debacle might be said to be Sacromonte. With its bridges to both Tianxia and Malan burned, Asphodel would be firmly wedged back under their thumb despite them having had no real involvement in any of this. All the gains at no cost.

“It is still a great source of wealth,” Song quietly said.

“Which will be spent rebuilding Tratheke,” Evander said, “and repaying the loans extended to me by the Watch. To call your Brigadier Chilaca a brigand would be doing him disservice, for he is more thorough a plunderer than any highwayman.”

Ah, so that was the brigadier’s ploy. The Watch would extend loans to restore the shipyard and slowly parlay that into influence over the facility. The Conclave, she thought, would love Chilaca for it. It was exactly the sort of ploy they applauded.

Evander reached for his glasses, put them back on.

“But look at me,” he said, thinly smiling. “Bringing Asphodel and the Watch into it so it can cease being about either of us.”

She ought, at least, to give him the closure of a clean admission.

“I made my decision knowing it would put an end to anything between us,” Song said. “And I could claim I had no choice, but I did – I chose my family, and my duty to the black.”

He cursed.

“As you should,” Evander bit out angrily. “I would have thought less of you for another choice. Which is what vexes me so.”

She licked her lips.

“Evander, I-”

He shook his head.

“No,” he said. “I courted you knowing you were a watchwoman and a Ren besides.”

He breathed in.

“Indeed, it only added to the allure,” he said. “Someone not beholden to me and… understanding of legacy, so to speak. It would be unseemly of me to now begrudge that you acted as these stations demand instead of putting me first.”

“But you wanted me to,” Song said.

“Isn’t that what everyone wants?” Evander tiredly replied. “To be the prize chosen.”

He shook his head.

“I had no future to offer you,” he said.

As much for himself as her, Song thought.

“And you did not seek me,” he continued, “I sought you.”

Which was true, and still.

“I wish I could have…”

His jaw clenched.

“There is that, at least,” Evander croaked.

He rose to his feet.

“It would be best if we did not meet again,” he said. “There is only so much foolishness I can stomach in myself.”

“You were not foolish,” Song quietly said. “Or at least, not alone in that foolishness. I chose to become involved even knowing the Yellow Earth was keeping an eye on me – it was madness, and only to be expected that they would make me pay for it.”

He stared at her for a long moment, then wrenched his gaze away.

“It was a summer haze, Song,” he said. “And summer has passed. It always passes, even if though it seems eternal.”

Her jaw clenched.

“Farewell, Song Ren,” Evander said. “Think fondly of me, if you can.”

And the Lord Rector of Asphodel left as she sat there, watching his back.

Angharad had waited to find out what happened to the infernal forge before turning herself in.

It had been eight days since the rising of the Newborn, and the morning after his ceremony on Victory Square the Lord Rector had opened the roads to the Lordsport to travelers again. A messenger was sent in the morning, as soon as she got the news, and by early afternoon they’d returned. Angharad sat with her uncle in the smallest of the drawing rooms, the two of the pouring of the letter sent by the captain of the Golden Tide.

“Captain Alagon writes the ship was damaged in the fighting and will not be able to sail until repairs are finished,” Angharad quoted, passing him the letter.

Uncle Osian sat on the sofa, ever calm, but she stayed standing. There was a fresh novelty to being able to stay up without her cane – she might not yet be fully healed, but she had at least left that part of recovery behind her. Her uncle had encouraged her to call on Brigadier Chilaca’s personal, but Angharad had declined. Not for fear she would lack skill, but for fear of them. The bones of her leg were still halfway made into coral, she could feel it from the way they sometimes bit at the inside of her flesh.

Angharad would prefer not to tell a soul about that, if she could.

“The Cordyles flotilla shot up their masts while they sat docked and they must have immediately flown a flag of surrender,” her uncle summed up. “Prudent of them. They have a few cannons but the ship’s a merchantman, unfit for real fighting.”

More worrying was what followed: Captain Alagon admitted to losing the cargo he was entrusted with, the crate in question disappeared when he went to check on it. The man was sparse on details, but it appeared the Golden Tide’s crew had fled their crippled ship after it was bombarded and only returned to it after the magnates drove the Cordyles crews out. By then the crate was gone, with the dockworkers swearing no one had seen anyone enter or spirit a crate away.

“I doubt the dockworkers were out and about during the fighting, so that means nothing,” Angharad noted.

They could not see something they had not been present to see.

“He adds something was left behind,” Osian frowned, and reached for a sealed fold at the bottom of the latter.

He broke the small wax mark and into his palm fell a small square of paper. Angharad leaned in, finding that stamped on the paper in red was intricate heraldry.

A triangle pointing out, with a stripe through the lower third, with a black ‘sun’ inside and two more on either side of the triangle, suggesting the repetition of the shape. This was all held within a round seal filled with scratchy cryptoglyphs, all unrecognizable save for the crown at the top. Angharad did not need to be told to know this was the seal of the Office of Opposition. Locke and Key acknowledged the debt, and one day would ensure she received the knowledge she had bargained for.

She shared a silent look with her uncle, both of them acknowledging this without being fools enough to speak of the Office out loud in a house whose walls held both Masks and ufudu. Angharad let out a long breath.

“Time for the report, then,” she said. “This is as much as we will learn on the matter until they deign hold up their end of the bargain.”

And she had delayed the settling of her debts long enough. Her uncle’s dark eyes tightened.

“There are better ways of doing this, Angie,” he said.

Not for the first time. The smile she answered with was thin, a slice of lips.

“I do not think it better, to avoid consequence for what I have done,” she said. “More comfortable, perhaps, but that is not the same thing.”

Angharad did not like the kind of woman it made her, having schemed with the Lefthand House and traded an infernal forge away under the Watch’s nose.

So Angharad would kill her, even if it killed her too.

Osian Tredegar clenched, from head to toe, somehow reminding her of a coiled spring. Eight times he had argued against the notion now, but she could tell he would not force her hand. Not that he could, truly. His eyes searched her face, and after a long moment he sagged. It made her heart ache, so see him looking so defeated.

“I am proud of you,” Osian Tredegar quietly said. “I only wish I were not afraid for you as well.”

“Fire scours clean,” Angharad said. “When I emerge on the other side, there will be nothing left to fear.”

“I have no influence with the Krypteia,” he told her. “Once that report is in Officer Hage’s hands…”

“I know,” she said.

As she knew that speaking the full truth of her uncle’s involvement in this would end his career, if not worse. So she had… stretched the boundaries of fact, in her report. As far as Office Hage would know, Uncle Osian had been under the impression he was helping his niece pawn Antediluvian trifles to the Lefthand House to help pay debts she had accrued there. Finding the right phrasing to avoid an outright lie had taken her several evenings.

As for the Thirteenth, she had erased all trace of aid being rendered to her. It was not particularly difficult, considering that besides Song holding back reports for her and Maryam securing a map there was truthfully little to speak of. That made it easier to hide.

Angharad put on a smile, squeezed her uncle’s shoulder and left before she could begin to doubt herself any more than she already did. She personally handed the report to Officer Hage, who raised an eyebrow at the oddity of it not going through her brigade’s captain before telling her to sit while he read it.

Much as Angharad would have preferred to simply kill Imani Langa and be done with it, that would be robbing the Watch of the right to interrogate her and she had already cost the order enough. So instead she confessed everything worth confessing in her report, before requesting a meeting be held with Captain Imani of the Eleventh and Commander Osian Tredegar.

The old devil glanced at her, those prodigious eyebrows rising.

“Well, this promises to be interesting,” he said. “Granted. I will send her summons for the meeting to be had in the large drawing room in half an hour. I trust you can handle your uncle?”

There was an ironic undertone to the question that had her clenching her jaw, but it was not unearned. She nodded back jerkily, rising to fetch Osian. He was sitting in his room when she did, uniform unbuttoned and cup of brandy in hand – which he drained in a single swallow before following her out, though the buttons at least were done back up.

Imani was already seated in the drawing room when Angharad opened the door. The liar, as always, was impeccably dressed: her uniform was tailored, touched with red accents on the sides while her belt was adorned with stripes of colorful Uthukile beads. Angharad kept the door open for her uncle, then seated herself on the side of the room furthest from Imani. Who was, despite how she must be beginning to smell a rat, still calmly smiling.

“Good afternoon, Lady Tredegar,” she said, then inclined her head. “Commander.”

Uncle Osian eyed the ufudu with open dislike. Neither returned the greeting. Instead he sat besides Angharad, arms crossed.

“Or not,” Imani idly said. “Shall we wait for Officer Hage in silence, then?”

If the shared silent antipathy from the Tredegar corner of the room unnerved her, it did not show in the slightest. Uncle Osian was the one to break the silence.

“I understand,” he said, “that the Eleventh Brigade served ably in the defense of Black House when the cult attempted to burn it.”

Uncle Osian had been out in the city, during the same time, and only made his way back during a pause in the fighting.

“Brigadier Chilaca and his bodyguard mounted a spirited defense,” she smiled. “We merely did our part.”

“I hope,” Osian Tredegar said, “that this distinction will serve them well after today.”

Her brow rose but she did not address the unspoken implication – them, and not her. Two long minutes of silence stretched out until the door was opened. Officer Hage’s presence was only natural, but his company came as a surprise.

“Angharad, you fool,” Captain Song Ren bit out, entering after the devil.

The noblewoman rocked back like she had been slapped – as much at the surprise as at the insult.

“Pardon me?”

“Not likely,” Tristan Abrascal said, stepping in after her. “I was going to nap, you know. Very inconvenient timing.”

He was, bafflingly, wearing his formal uniform. Song liked hers, but Tristan? If he avoided it any more stringently Angharad might have thought it burned him to the touch.

“Neither presence was requested, Officer Hage,” Uncle Osian said.

“Not by you,” the older Mask acknowledged, closing the door. “But as Warrant Officer Tredegar handed me a report in which she confessed to multiple instances of treasonous behavior as a prelude to this meeting, I judged it necessary to involve the captain of her brigade and her closest Krypteia observer.”

He paused.

“Captain Imani, in this instance, stands for herself as both accused and captain of her own brigade,” Hage added.

The old devil gestured for the other two arrivals to sit, and the pair claimed seats between the Tredegar and the Lefthand House. Song, she only now noticed, held several sheaths of paper in hand as well as ink and a steel-tip pen. Tristan had nothing openly, though that hardly meant he had nothing. He was a deft hand at hiding tools and knives.

“Before we begin,” Song said, “I must state that the report Warrant Officer Tredegar sent was sent without my say-so as her commanding officer, and must thus be considered private correspondence instead of-”

Angharad closed her eyes, at once grateful and irritated. She was missing the point.

“No,” Hage said. “This is a Krypteia matter, girl. Your procedural tricks mean nothing.”

Song gritted her teeth.

“Sir, I must protest that-”

“Song,” Angharad quietly said. “Enough. You do not need to do this.”

Silver eyes turned on her.

“I most absolutely do,” Song Ren replied.

“There has been enough deception,” Angharad said, turning to the devil. “I stand by every word written. The rest of the Thirteenth had no knowledge of my actions and I misled my uncle as to my intentions.”

Uncle Osian stiffened and turned a betrayed look on her, for he had not been told about that part of the report. Angharad had come very close to lying, in trying to get him out of the hole she’d dragged him into. And, Sleeping God forgive her, if she had to lie outright over she would. It would be a lesser dishonor than ruining Osian Tredegar with her foolishness.

“Angie,” he hissed. “You didn’t-”

“Your family’s sorrows are not unusual enough to be interesting to me,” Hage informed them. “Cease. Captain Imani Langa, you have been accused of being an agent of the Lefthand House. Your word on the matter?”

“That I am not,” Imani calmly said. “Does Tredegar offer any proof beyond her assertion that I am?”

“You have in your possession a token of ironwood, one marking you as a member of the Lefthand House,” she said. “I have had it confirmed it is still in your possession, which a summary search of your quarters will prove.”

“I can confirm this,” Tristan added.

She eyed him warily: of course he could, since he was the one who had picked the room’s lock for her. To her mild distress, Tristan hadn’t even let her finish the sentence when she’d asked if he knew how to break into Imani Langa’s quarters. He was only too eager to repay what he saw as a favor from her, the passing of the information about the Nineteenth – which, ironically enough, she was now unmasking the source of. She glanced at him and found his face unreadable. Unsettling, in a man who put on a smile like another might a shirt.

Officer Hage cocked his head to the side.

“I am inclined to order that search,” he said. “Captain Imani?”

She bit her lip, then sighed.

“I didn’t account for her reaching out to Abrascal,” Imani said. “My mistake.”

She paused, turning to the devil.

“So?”

Hage snorted.

“You lose points for having driven them to turn on you,” the devil said, “but, narrowly, this remains a success. You pass your first year of lesser tradecraft.”

Tristan stilled and Angharad blinked, something like horror dawning on her. No, surely not?

“What is this?” she managed.

“Captain Imani Langa is a Krypteia student,” Hage plainly told her. “She approached you with this offer at our behalf.”

“I,” she began, then licked her lips. “I do not understand.”

“She can’t be Krypteia,” Song intervened. “She’s in Stripe classes and the student list-”

Imani turned an amused look on the Tianxi.

“The Masks left a public way to ascertain their exact numbers,” she delicately said, “and you believed them?”

“She has you there,” Tristan murmured.

“How many of you are there?” Song bit out.

“It could be more, or less,” Imani smiled.

“Finding out such a thing and reporting it to Colonel Cao would be worth a great many points, I expect,” Hage chuckled.

And then the amusement was gone.

“But while it was judged necessary to test the loyalties of Angharad Tredegar,” Hage said, “there is a reason she was chosen to be tested first of your cabal.”

At the back of the room, arms folded, Uncle Osian paled.

“Me,” he quietly said. “The real test was for me.”

“Prior assessments had you marked as distant from your kin in Malan,” the old devil clinically said. “That was naturally revised when you spent several thousand ramas to extricate your niece from her troubles last year.”

The seeming old man drummed fingers on the table.

“Divided loyalties could be tolerated in a captain, whose workshop would act at the direction of superior officers,” Hage said. “In a commander, however? No. You would have answered directly to the Wednesday Council, operating largely without supervision. You could not be allowed to serve as a senior officer without being properly vetted.”

“And I failed that test,” Uncle Osian softly said.

“We will return to that momentarily,” the devil said.

His eyes went back to Angharad.

“Warrant Officer Angharad Tredegar,” he formally said, and by habit she straightened. “It is my evaluation that while you failed your loyalty vetting, you demonstrated commitment to the Watch and walked back actionable treason. That you then confessed to your actions is further mark in your favor.”

A pause.

“Warrant Officer Abrascal, as the Krypteia officer who observed her most closely you are allowed to speak on the matter.”

Tristan cleared his throat.

“That she acted disloyally is not in question,” he said, and Angharad’s jaw clenched but there was no arguing with the truth. “But I was willing to remain uninvolved in her personal affairs in large part because it was my assessment that even if leveraged she would not act directly against the Watch. Events have borne out that assessment.”

“She sold an infernal forge to Hell,” Imani Langa objected.

“She traded it for a shot at putting down the Newborn, our duty as an order,” Tristan cooly corrected. “The Krypteia must act on fact, not speculation, and the facts are as I stated.”

Hage cocked an eyebrow.

“Your judgement will be taken into consideration.”

The devil’s gaze turned back to Angharad.

“It is my decision that you will not be placed under arrest, though until the Obscure Committee has decided on your punishment any unsupervised contact with foreign officials will be considered treason and warrant immediate execution,” Hage said. “I will be recommending to the committee that you be placed under a probation of five years, under suspended writ.”

A glance at Song’s face told her this was worse than had been to be hoped for but better than she could have expected. Then the devil’s face turned towards her uncle and Angharad’s stomach clenched.

“Commander Osian Tredegar,” Hage said. “Despite your niece’s attempts to reframe the situation in your favor, you have been under observation for some time and her report is not our sole source on the matter.”

No, Angharad thought, stomach turning to ice. The devil smiled thinly, showing neither set of teeth.

“You have colluded with foreign powers with intent to breach the Iscariot Accords. You have facilitated treason on two counts – by failing to report knowledge of an infiltrator, then in helping Warrant Officer Tredegar doing their bidding – then committed treason by smuggling a restricted aetheric device.”

A pause.

“Your defense?”

Angharad rose.

“My uncle was dec-”

The devil turned a gaze on her that stole the words right out of her throat. Underneath the shell, under the skin of a well-to-do aging tradesman, was something that would snuff out her life and never think twice of it.

“Be silent,” Hage said, “or be gagged.”

Angharad swallowed, and let Song tug her back down.

“I have no defense, sir,” Osian Tredegar said, then rubbed the bridge of his nose. “I willingly chose blood over black, and cannot say I would not do it again.”

Angharad tried to rise again, but Song’s hands squeezed her arm until she stopped. The silver-eyed woman shook her head. Angharad almost ignored her – how could she abandon her own blood? – but there was still a tension to the captain’s frame. As if the fight was not yet finished for her.

“Then you are under arrest, commander,” Hage said. “You will be held in the cells of Black House until transport can be arranged to the Rookery, where you will stand trial before a committee-appointed tribunal.”

The only outcome for which, Angharad thought, would be death. There was no denying what had been done, and… what was Song doing, scribbling on a piece of paper?

“That will not be necessary, Officer Hage,” Song said.

She blew on what she had just written, then to Angharad’s bewilderment she passed the paper to devil. The creature raised an eyebrow.

“Chilaca’s pardon,” he said. “Interesting. You choose to save Commander Tredegar over having Tristan stand trial for Lieutenant Apurva’s death?”

Song put on a surprised face, visibly insincere.

“Why would he stand trial over such a thing?” Song asked. “Lieutenant Apurva was detained, interrogated and executed at the order of Captain Domingo Santos, who was appointed to investigate the Ivory Library by the Obscure Committee itself.”

Angharad looked back and forth between them, baffled.

“Did he now?” Hage asked.

Song smiled serenely.

“I have signed papers swearing as much,” she replied.

Hage turned a look on Tristan, who coughed into his fist.

“Tights as brothers we are, Captain Domingo and I,” he said.

Despite herself, Angharad felt hope bloom in her chest. The stare returned to Song.

“A pardon can be overturned by the Conclave,” Hage said. “The brigadier won’t put his neck on the line for your ploy.”

“You could bring this to the Conclave,” Song agreed. “Of course, doing so would require a broader examination of the situation and thus expose to an assembly including every single captain-general of the Watch that the Krypteia turned a blind eye to the attempted abduction of a watchman on contract, that they failed in finding or subverting a major cult that nearly took over Asphodel while mere students succeeded at the same and that under their nose an infernal forge was lost to the Office of Opposition while the Masks spent their time playing loyalty games.”

Silence hung over the room, thick as fog.

“I am but a warrant officer, sir,” Song Ren pleasantly smiled. “But it seems to me that such thing might turn into a great scandal. The kind that might damage the reputation of the Watch at large and of the Krypteia in particular.”

“Are you blackmailing me?” Hage said, sounding amused.

“I am discussing cause and effect,” Song replied. “If this seems a threat to you, that is not of my doing.”

The devil considered her.

“Shilin Zhuge’s fondness for you makes more sense, now,” Hage said. “That might as well have come out of his mouth.”

“My great-uncle is a teacher worth honoring,” she said.

“Then he will have taught you the limits of the means you employ,” the devil said.

Song inclined her head.

“I would listen to your terms.”

The devil glanced at Osian Tredegar for a moment, then clicked his mandibles.

“Demotion back to captain,” he said. “Loss of all revenues related to the isibankwa-pattern rifle beyond payment of your current debts. For the next five years you will be confined to an island workshop and you will permanently lose your enlisted officer’s right to refuse being interrogated under truth-telling contracts.”

His head cocked to the side.

“Though that will not be an official punishment, do not expect to ever be promoted to senior command again,” Hage said.

Angharad swallowed. She had killed his careers. Sleeping God, she had good as ruined him. The devil rose to his feet.

“Captain Ren?”

Song turned to Angharad, then to Uncle Osian, with a question in her eyes. Angharad only silently looked at her uncle, who breathed out and nodded.

“We accept the terms,” Song replied.

Hage inclined his head, rising to his feet.

“It will be a black mark on your record to have intervened,” he said.

“Then is it a good thing my cloak was already of that color,” Song evenly replied.

The devil left without another word. Angharad genuinely could not tell whether or not he had been angry. She could tell, however, that Imani Langa’s smile at her when she got up was almost mocking.

“It was nothing personal, darling,” Captain Imani assured her. “I look forward to working with you again.”

“I hold no grudge for your duty,” Angharad conceded.

Then she smiled.

“My dislike of you is entirely on personal grounds.”

Unmoved, the other woman waved her words away and strolled out. A moment later Angharad her trip and curse.

“Sorry, it was an accident,” Maryam said, sounding utterly unconvincing.

The signifier then popped her head into the room.

“I see we didn’t need to smuggle her out after all,” Maryam said. “Good, Coyac says he can get my ship’s engine running but none of us can sail the damn thing.”

Angharad choked.

“What is this?” she asked.

“Loyalty pulls both ways,” Tristan mildly said. “What you give, you earn.”

“You’re not longer my least favorite member of the Thirteenth, Tredegar,” Maryam told her. “Don’t let it go to your head.”

Baffled, she sat there until Song rose and squeezed her shoulder.

“It’s a choice,” Song Ren reminded her. “We all get to make it, Angharad. And we have.”

She offered her hand, smiling. You don’t deserve it, Angharad told herself. She knew that. But then so did Song, and she’d offered it anyway. Angharad took the hand, and even as Song helped her up a shiver went down her leg – which she stood on fully, for the last of the pain was gone. Coral made into bone again.

The Fisher’s verdict: they were making something, the four of them, and it was not crooked.

Damned be she, but Angharad agreed.

57 thoughts on “Chapter 78

  1. CantankerousBellerophan's avatar CantankerousBellerophan

    I genuinely dislike the writing decisions here.

    The Watch are cops. They’ve always been cops. The idea that they’d deliberately entrap their own in sick loyalty games while spectacularly dropping the ball on their sworn duties is believable. All cops, no exceptions, including fantasy cops. That’s not the part I don’t like. What I don’t like is having an explanation for the apparent incompetence of the Lefthand House.

    We didn’t need one. Intelligence agencies are always incompetent. Comes with the territory of promoting for loyalty to power. Competent spies would be a threat to the people doing the promotion, and so you get clown shows like 600 failed attempts on Castro’s life. It was believable that Imani and Jabulani, spies weeks away from each other by boat, would fail to communicate with each other. Imani didn’t need to secretly be a Mask the whole time.

    Furthermore, the Krypteia winnowing operation shouldn’t work for the same reason the Lefthand House should be incompetent. Any sufficiently competent winnower would either be unwilling to promote similarly competent candidates to their level, or else be so powerful that nobody could threaten them or hold them accountable. They’ve gone with the 2nd option, as both winnowers we know of are immortal. Sure, immortals ossify over time, their natures becoming predictable, but that is still no way to run an operation meant to protect all Radiant civilization from the consequences of its actions. They are betting the survival of everyone they consider a person on the good intentions of ageless monsters. If they wanted to, the winnowers could hijack the entire Watch from within over the course of a few centuries. Even one winnower would be able to do immense damage long term, seeding Krypteia agents more loyal to them than to the Watch across the entirety of Vesper. A conspiracy of one, unending.

    Sakkas said he was old too. Maybe that’s how the Sunless House brought down the Second Empire.

    But as far as we know, this hasn’t happened. The Radiant nations have won their bet against the natures of a cadre of murderous immortals. They’ve even beaten value drift, that eternal corruptor of institutions, by ensuring values are only ever conveyed by people whose values can’t change. But that, too, is doom. Institutions MUST change. Empires which refuse to change always fall once they’ve exhausted the source of their wealth and power. The people exercising it know they won’t be able to change, and so cling  to it all the way to catastrophe. This always occurs in institutions whose leadership never changes. Like gerontocracies.

    What the Watch have done is deliberately ossify the values of their arm dedicated to maintaining the values of the rest of the organization. Long term, this guarantees the values of the Watch as a whole will remain largely the same, while those of Vesper do not. The Watch, the one institution which must always remain forward-looking, and must always do this while remaining visibly neutral, has ensured their understanding of all both these things was set in stone centuries ago. This can only lead to disaster.

    I would argue it already should have. It’s been 700 years. There are staggeringly few real-world empires to last so long without any intermediate collapses, and the real world is significantly less hostile. If the Krypteia work the way they have been shown to in this chapter, the Watch would be too inflexible to have survived 7 centuries. Its values would be too anachronistic for the rest of Radiant society to bear. This is a worldbuilding mistake.

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      1. nick012000's avatar nick012000

        You’re not wrong about him being insufferable, but unless ErraticErrata decides to ban him, there’s nothing much we can do other than laugh at his inane Communist dribble.

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      1. Nightshade's avatar Nightshade

        The guy’s admitted he’s only doing this for fun, try not to take his comments personally. If you really can’t stomach it, just skip his comments.

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      2. Quiet Reader's avatar Quiet Reader

        You should gain some ability to read criticism without getting so rankled, buddy.

        Cank, love your comments. Make them louder and longer and keep using that magic beam that seemingly forces Cynic to engage w shit they don’t like.

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    1. Some Smartass's avatar Some Smartass

      Or these particular immortals only joined that political faction recently (by immortal standards), or there’s some institutional safeguard against mortally-impossible level of power accumulation that we haven’t seen, or maybe the Watch isn’t actually an empire. You make a lot of assumptions.

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    2. masterofbones's avatar masterofbones

      I suspect that value creep is more damaging to an intelligence agency/secret society than poor flexibility, as long as it was founded with good values to begin with. 700 years is a long time, but I think having a handful of ageless entities running things at the top could theoretically last that long, though plenty of cracks would form(and have).

      The organization may be somewhat overly optimistic, but I’d say it is at least as corrupt as the FBI, which is more than a century old itself. It doesn’t seem egregious.

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    3. broadaxe's avatar broadaxe

      They arent really entraping their own though, they testing and teaching students, not members 😛
      you could argue differently for Osain ofc, but he was not really being entrapped, so much as watched, as he decided to wade into the situation.

      and your complaint that they are too competent and need new blood and ideas to work seems misplaced, after all they were so incompentent that the new blood had to find and solve the actual situation for them 😛

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      1. CantankerousBellerophan's avatar CantankerousBellerophan

        At the beginning of the Asphodel arc these “students” were taught the rights of Watch officers they could exercise during their “test.” Rights which are reserved, by multiple treaties, for Watch officers only. Because they are literally full officers of the Watch, with all attending rights.

        Song has, on screen, used her right to dictate the terms under which she could be interrogated under a truth contract. A right granted to enlisted officers of the Watch only, not ground troops. Because she is a full officer of the Watch.

        This is entrapment by the Watch of their own.

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      2. Frank MC (Abnaxis)'s avatar Frank MC (Abnaxis)

        They’re Watch officers, but they aren’t Covenanters yet, and it’s the Covenants entrapping them. I imagine the average rank and file of the Watch officers would be just as annoyed at the practice if it was widely practiced beyond the elite in-group.

        Honestly, almost everything about Scholomance and how students are treated makes a lot more sense if you assume every task assigned to the students is intended, ritualized hazing. The pledges are taking their licks.

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    4. Aetheric Sea's avatar Aetheric Sea

      While I agree with you that the watch is a cannibalistic rigid organisation I do not think that’s a writing flaw. I think the watch is meant to be failing. It only succeeded with the intervention of the high priest of the god of long odds and several other talented individuals. Individuals it nearly destroyed while they were saving it.

      It reminds me a lot of the Spartan system, which deliberately ossified itself with a combination of child abuse and strong checks and balances. It the static system of ancient greece this was enough to keep the city state around for centuries.

      The watch has been shown to be failing, it got lucky this time and it’s power is demonstrably fragile. It is only due to the fact that the world of Pale Lights is not stable but actively in decline is such a static institution able to survive so long.

      So far the Watch has only been obstructionist and deliberately violent and so it’s actively failing.

      I think this makes for interesting writing, we’ve seen EE handle reform in dying institutions before and I trust this is the sort of thing we’ll see again.

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      1. CantankerousBellerophan's avatar CantankerousBellerophan

        That would be plausible if the Watch had existed for only a few centuries max. My concern is that 700 years of Radiant culture value drift paired with essentially zero drift in the people deciding the character of the rest of the Watch is simply implausible. 700 years ago we were burning women at the stake for administering herbal remedies that actually work to sick people. 300 years ago people genuinely believed in the divine right of kings. We’re getting potentially empire-shattering backlash from a single generation of drift towards queer liberation right now because the people who run our empire are merely 30 years older than the average of the population. EE doesn’t write worlds with deeply ingrained patriarchy (a fact I adore about his writing), but that’s the kind of cultural distance we’re talking about. People who ossified when culture was different always promote people like themselves, which results in ever-increasing radicalism as the number of people like that decreases. A 700 year old HR manager would be worse than useless. They’d be actively detrimental to any organization they were working for.

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    5. Steiny's avatar Steiny

      lets do this eh? So your first problem is that captain Imani is becoming the convenient excuse instead of the fact that intelligence agencies are stupid. Never did you yourself consider the consequences with it. The lefthand house is incompetent by letting Imani join them in the first place. As such it’s no excuse for why the lefthand house was incompetent it is an assertion that they are, instead it is here used to hammer the point of Hage in deeper, that the masks are more then we thought them to be, that the watch is more divided then even we assumed it to be.

      As for your second point, you must be even lazier to use that brain of yours then apparent in the first point of your speech what exactly makes you assume you know how the higher levels of the watch work? All we know it’s divided, divided and even more divided. Yes you have a point that perhaps one immortal being can subvert the entirety of the watch given enough time, but it’s not one immortal. It’s multiple immortals playing against each other with mortals making sure the power is always as balanced as it can be, because mortals can only have power when immortals are divided. Your argument amounts to multiple people can’t rule, because one could rule if they do it right and everyone else blunders.

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      1. CantankerousBellerophan's avatar CantankerousBellerophan

        Imani isn’t a member of the Lefthand House. She’s Krypteia. Hage likely gave her the coin and arranged for the delivery of the drawing of Gwydion. It wouldn’t be difficult to do these things, for one with his apparent resources and connections. I’d even say it’s a toss-up whether Gwydion is alive at all. That could have been a lie as well, we’ve no solid indication otherwise. The only person who ever said he’s alive was known to be testing Angharad’s loyalty the whole time.

        The incompetence of the Lefthand House was just in demanding the same thing of the same woman twice without knowing they’d done so. That was entirely believable without the last-minute reveal that Angharad’s entire character arc for the past year of real-world story was a psyop invented by a woman she’ll now have to share classes with. To me, that kind of twist, coming as it did with no way of reasonably guessing it was coming (I’ve done the rereads, there’s NOTHING which indicates this is possible), is up there with “It was all a dream!” in terms of lazy writing clichés.

        And it didn’t need to be this way. What if Tristan had known all along? He’s Krypteia, it’s feasible he could have run into her while locating teachers. Angharad would never have asked him because she didn’t trust him until literally just now, and he may not have even answered unless she told him why she was asking. Which she absolutely would not have done, because she’d assume he would instantly turn her over. It could have been a great way to hammer home the lesson that she can trust the 13th, that everyone has valuable input, and that everyone is people even if they spent their childhood scraping by in the streets instead of stabbing Grey Mirrors. Instead we have, “Technically, I’m the only one in the room not committing treason,” but unfunny this time.

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    6. lavantant's avatar lavantant

      i agree with many of your explanations of what is happening, however I think I disagree with your conclusions, I personally believe that we will be starting to look closer at the fundamental flaws of the system over the coming books, and that such a thing is exactly what Tristan is meant to help illuminate in the story structure, just as he did on the island.

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    7. EchoDoctor's avatar EchoDoctor

      I don’t think the Watch are cops, honestly. Vesper already has law enforcement groups, and the Watch is explicitly not one of them- they canonically absolutely do not care about whatever laws you might break, so long as you aren’t touching anything that might cause mass Death By Supernatural Bullshit.

      They don’t quite have a neat real-world equivalent. About the closest I can think of is that they’re like if the UN had an anti-nuclear weapon task force that was legally allowed to just show up and kill you if you got some uranium.

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      1. CantankerousBellerophan's avatar CantankerousBellerophan

        Such a real-world organization would be cops. One whose remit is more just than the average cops, but cops all the same. People empowered by the state to commit largely arbitrary violence and be shielded by the law from consequence are cops. Even if there is nominally a process for determining who recieves that violence, the problem is that the people dishing it out will be defended by the institution and the state, while the victims have to do with whatever defense they can rustle up from local support or personal resources.

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      2. nick012000's avatar nick012000

        >the problem is that the people dishing it out will be defended by the institution and the state

        What state? The Watch are explicitly extranational and politically neutral.

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      3. Scott's Folly's avatar Scott's Folly

        defended by the institution and the state

        What state?

        Not so much ‘the state’, more ‘the status quo’. The major factions in Vesper all agree that there are larger-context threats in their world, even as they bicker and war amongst themselves. For all that they play against the Watch when it plays on their level, they still support it in its ‘proper’ role. Being “extranational and politically neutral” means that they get to call on all nations and factions for purposes of their remit, not none.

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    8. aurikdomi's avatar aurikdomi

      your complaints are some of the exact things I’m celebrating about this chapter.

      having Imani be either just a mask or a double agent with loyalty to the black has greatly reassured me about the watch.

      having ossified their values in this world is spectacular. Because despite what you might think, the watch has 1 purpose. To protect the world that remains. Guaranteeing the watch doesn’t drift from that goal into the petty power squabbles of the other nations, into trying to make a nation of themselves is probably the only reason this world is still alive (for the radiants anyway)

      You say empires don’t last long (fair) but think a hostile world would worsen that statistic. Research instead shows groups more tightly bind together when there is an external threat.

      Also their purpose makes them both the money and the power they need to survive, namely fighting back the dark. When/if they ever finish in their mission we can only hope it’s as you say and they crumble as an institution since there would be no more threat other than those they create.

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    9. aurikdomi's avatar aurikdomi

      your complaints are some of the exact things I’m celebrating about this chapter.

      having Imani be either just a mask or a double agent with loyalty to the black has greatly reassured me about the watch.

      having ossified their values in this world is spectacular. Because despite what you might think, the watch has 1 purpose. To protect the world that remains. Guaranteeing the watch doesn’t drift from that goal into the petty power squabbles of the other nations, into trying to make a nation of themselves is probably the only reason this world is still alive (for the radiants anyway)

      You say empires don’t last long (fair) but think a hostile world would worsen that statistic. Research instead shows groups more tightly bind together when there is an external threat.

      Also their purpose makes them both the money and the power they need to survive, namely fighting back the dark. When/if they ever finish in their mission we can only hope it’s as you say and they crumble as an institution since there would be no more threat other than those they create.

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    10. aurikdomi's avatar aurikdomi

      your complaints are some of the exact things I’m celebrating about this chapter.

      having Imani be either just a mask or a double agent with loyalty to the black has greatly reassured me about the watch.

      having ossified their values in this world is spectacular. Because despite what you might think, the watch has 1 purpose. To protect the world that remains. Guaranteeing the watch doesn’t drift from that goal into the petty power squabbles of the other nations, into trying to make a nation of themselves is probably the only reason this world is still alive (for the radiants anyway)

      You say empires don’t last long (fair) but think a hostile world would worsen that statistic. Research instead shows groups more tightly bind together when there is an external threat.

      Also their purpose makes them both the money and the power they need to survive, namely fighting back the dark. When/if they ever finish in their mission we can only hope it’s as you say and they crumble as an institution since there would be no more threat other than those they create.

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    1. nimelennar's avatar nimelennar

      Not that EE’s not entitled to one, or couldn’t take one even if not “entitled,” but I thought the extra-long break around the holidays was replacing the break in between books, and we’re going directly into Book 3 without a hiatus.

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      1. Evri's avatar Evri

        There’s a free post on EE’s patreon where he talks about wanting to take a break (the backcover for book 3 is also in this post). So there will be no chapter release on the March 21st since there will be an AMA on the Discord instead, and then updates will pause until April 11th.

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  2. masterofbones's avatar masterofbones

    Song’s dalliance may be the best written fling I’ve come across in literature. Certainly the healthiest. Very fun from start to finish.

    I’m glad to see Osian get his punishment. Dude was waaaay out of line and he seriously needed correction. Execution would be too much but demotion was needed.

    I loved Tristan as per usual, though his asexuality is… weird. Dude is a rat, but the moment sexuality gets brought in he acts like a spoiled rich kid being offered $20 sneakers. He has shown time and time again that he is willing to do absolutely gross/horrific things to accomplish his goals, but he draws the line at flirting or any form of sexuality whatsoever? Perhaps if it was some deep trauma of his childhood that would make sense, but I don’t really get that vibe. It always seems like haughty dismissal rather than disturbed horror. As a mask, utilizing sexuality is a MUST. As a rat, knowing how to use sexuality is a MUST. I don’t care whether he is horny or not, he needs to be willing to pretend that he is.

    Angharad not realizing that her whole struggle was actually just a test for Osian is so fitting for her life thus far – Endless grit and determination but a terrible sense of direction. I was kind of surprised as to how quickly the sleeping god cancelled his punishment. I suppose Angharad has been a cripple long enough haha.

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    1. lavantant's avatar lavantant

      Imagine that you were informed that as a spy one way you could get some answers would be to eat the shit of others. Even with some way to make it sanitary it would be pretty gross to you, and you would be averse to it. I am not even vaguely in the same hemisphere as ace, but that’s how I think he sees it, he would be willing to if it was a last resort or if it really needed to be done, but honestly there’s not that many situations in which that actually is the only, best, or even an above average option.

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      1. masterofbones's avatar masterofbones

        *I* wouldn’t eat shit for info in your scenario, not unless the stakes were high. But Tristan absolutely would. He’s done worse to win.

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    2. theImmortalBlaze's avatar theImmortalBlaze

      Eh, I don’t think Tristan’s avoidance of using sexuality as a tool is the failing you seem to think it is. He works around his asexuality in a similar manner to how he works around things like his (comparatively) poor marksmanship or limited book learning. By opting to ‘fail’ to notice when someone’s coming on to him, or avoiding solutions that involve shooting, or going undercover as a laborer rather than a merchant. While it’d be possible to muddle through, Tristan found alternatives that he judged less risky.

      Avoids the chances of pulling a “how do you do, fellow sex-having people”

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    3. Rob's avatar Rob

      It’s worth noting two things with Tristan.

      1. His training was only ever partial. He’s not done yet. And even then, it leans far more towards the “in and out, no witnesses” side of things than the personal manipulation side. Sexuality awareness is necessary for many kinds of spy, but not necessarily for all types of Mask. There’s overlap between the two roles, sure, but it’s also heavily implied that there are notably different kinds of Mask AND that Tristan is barely into his official training.
        • It’s also worth noting that introducing any kind of sex related training prior to him arriving at Scholomance would have likely screwed up his relationship with the preson training him, probably irreperably. That’s fine if you have multiple teachers, but since he only had the one and she was explicitly taking on a grandmotherly role, it wouldn’t be worth the alienation risk.
      2. Tristan is asexual in a world that may not know or recognize what that means. He doesn’t have the terms for it that we do, and while he’s aware that he’s fundementally different from people in that way and tries to hide it, that doesn’t mean he understands what he’s hiding. And his parents, the people who he could have maybe talked to about this and might have been able to explain things to him, died before he hit puberty. Tristan never even got The Talk, much less a comprehensive explanation of how sexual and romantic attraction functions in and underpins society. All his information about sexual/romantic attraction comes from observing others, and even then because of how social standards mean most people express sexual interest less often than they feel it he’s probably not aware how MUCH other people notice attraction. To him, it’s something he remembers and deals with whenever people bring it up, not a fundemental part of his experience, and he seems unaware that for other people it IS fundemental
        • It’s worth noting that from what I can tell, Tristan views sex/romantic love the way he does stimulants, though he shows less revulsion than he does with things like painkillers or even alcohol. It’s something other people tell him is pleasant and clearly care about a lot, but he has no personal desire for and has seen screw people up. He recognizes that other people offer it for various reasons, and they usually aren’t directly malevolent ones, but still finds it a little bewildering that people think he would want it.

      So it’s not that he draws the line at flirting, it’s that it confuses him and he’s bad at it so he avoids the situations because trying things he’s bad at are potentially dangerous to him. The lack of context/desire means he’s more likely to screw up than reliably achieve a goal, so he doesn’t make the attempt. It only comes off an haughty because he doesn’t fully understand how much other people care about the answers. To him, he’s turning down a beer, not telling them that they aren’t pretty enough or whatever. Cluelessness often comes off as malicious or haughty if there’s a cultural expectation that the person will have that knowledge/context- and most cultures DO have an expectation of some level of sexual interest.

      He’s not a rich kid turning his nose up at $20 sneakers. A closer analogy would be an autistic person (in like the 1800s, before people really knew what that was) who doesn’t understand why people laugh at most jokes, just that they do, so they might mistime a laugh or respond with too much or too little enthusiasm or semi frequently miss that it was a joke entirely if they aren’t expecting it. In that case, if it’s better to come off as not having a sense of humor than weird by getting humor wrong, such a person might opt for ignoring jokes entirely. Tristan is lacking context that’s considered fundemental to the point of being near universal, has never had it explained to him, doesn’t know why he’s missing it, and doesn’t even have a full picture of what’s going over his head, but does know that standing out or getting it wrong can make people start swingging.

      If he had time and directed tutelage and a reason to care, he could probably figure out how to convincingly fake it? He’s a decent enough actor, although the “misses it if it’s not obvious because he doesn’t think about it” thing would still potentially be an issue. But between being a street kid and then in life threatening situations, not having a more experienced figure he could trust to talk to about things, the likely lack of general knowledge about his sexuality that would make it hard to even know where to start, and it not obviously directly contributing to his goals (survival, vengance, and now protecting his friends), it’s not surprising that he hasn’t done so yet. Even if he becomes more aware of the disconnect now that he has friends he could maybe talk to about it, he may never put in the amount of extra effort into learning how to fake it if there’s no real reason to. If it’s an important part of becoming a Mask (possibly, although it’s unlikely to be a firm requirement) or it becomes an obstacle at some point, he’ll probably at least try to pick up the basics. How well he’ll do at it is more questionable, of course. But it’s not surprising that Tristan as he is now hasn’t really had the chance or seen a need to.

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    4. aurikdomi's avatar aurikdomi

      I mean it’s not unlikely he experienced a lot of SA in his childhood after family death before abuella.

      that being said maybe learning how to flirt would be a skill the krypteia will teach him, I think from a more meta perspective the author is having a counter point to the incredibly horny angharad and the scale Song and Maryam provide between.

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      1. aurumkainyx's avatar aurumkainyx

        It’s as least as likely he had a childhood entirely free of CSA. Why does that have to be a justification, when he doesn’t need one?

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    5. aurumkainyx's avatar aurumkainyx

      All sexuality is weird, to be quite honest. I’m no ace myself, but this argument could be made regardless of Tristan’s orientation, and is weaker for it.

      True, there exists a situation in which he might compromise himself for an objective, to pretend who and how he shares a bed, is something it isn’t for social advantage, but that’s drab, when I could simply go into town and see that kind of closetry.

      Arguably, it’s more compelling to see him use every tool except sexuality, especially with options for contrast down the line.

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  3. That was a very satisfying ending to this arc.It seems that the arc was ultimately Mask focused which is a great introduction into the working of a Watch Contract. Song captained so hard there at the end. The Masks watching Masks plotline rubs me in a wrong way but I’m sure it will become relevant in future arcs. More Masks than what are on the list, how did I not think of that. Ultimately great arc all around, definitely top 2 out of 3 of the storylines.

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  4. Mirror Night's avatar Mirror Night

    Osain ruined and Velaphi is dead? Yeah I appreciate the diversity that EE provides but IMO he has a tendency to utterly screw over black men who do the right thing in ways that lack agency and it really annoys me.

    velaphi really annoys me limited characterization and dies doing the right thing on a island that ain’t his while the native white characters cleon, song boytoy and his former warden all get happish endings? Frak off

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    1. Storybookknight's avatar Storybookknight

      Are you alright? I can only imagine how much mental energy it must take to keep track of all of the characters’ races in everything you read and decide whether or not an author has passed some form of ideological purity test based on what happens to people of different skin color. That frankly just sounds like an exhausting way to consume literature, or live your life really.

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      1. Mirror Night's avatar Mirror Night

        Doesn’t really take much mental effort. I am a Black Male so I take special note of the treatment of Black Male characters. The fact you don’t keep track of these things quite frankly suggests your a white dude.

        So yeah if I think characters that look like me are getting a raw deal then I will call it out. And I think Velaphi & Osian got done real dirty in this Book.

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  5. Mirror Night's avatar Mirror Night

    Yeah I am not a fan of this Book…feels like the 13th got way too much plot armor. The consequences for big choices was basically minimal…Song and Maryam especially got easy resolutions to their problems. Maryam even got the big damn hero moment (after getting real close to murder) to close this Book despite working her own agenda since she basically got to the island. Song’s family basically safe after her choosing Duty over Family was setup as a big consequence.

    Gang felt like they got more Plot Armor then Heroes in PGTE. Tristan was great no complaints…Angharad paid a heavier price trying to go for a forge solo to save her father then Maryam (getting 5 seconds away from murder or Song (deciding banging a royal was a good idea) did for their actions is wild. Book 1 felt like everyone was in danger whereas Book 2 just kept warping things to make sure the 13th got out the arc with no consequences.

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    1. Illioneus's avatar Illioneus

      It seems like these chapters are giving us the satisfying parts of the endings and we’ll start seeing consequences at the start of book three.

      Tristan still has mostly unknown side effects of near-sainthood, and Maryam seemed to feel a major loss when she surrendered power to Hooks. Angharad is facing punishment from scholomance as well according to Hage.

      It does seem like Song got off with nothing but hurt feelings about Evander, so yeah I agree the duty over family choice doesn’t feel as impactful now.

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  6. Aetheric Sea's avatar Aetheric Sea

    This is one of the best novels I’ve ever read, period.

    The character arcs are well thought out, they tie together with other character arcs and the plot really well too to create an incredibly intricate story. I’ve found the growth of all four main characters to be fascinating and I adore some of the side characters like Izel.

    The conspiracy was intricate but makes perfect sense which is astonishingly rare to see. And the entire world is mysterious and deeply engrained into the story.

    The pacing is also excellent, the multiple PoVs are balanced to keep the story moving while providing perspective.

    This is honestly one of the best stories I’ve ever read.

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  7. Sun Dog's avatar Sun Dog

    Caught in treason, Osian eats a demotion and has to give up the money he was gonna pay down his debts with. That’s probably unfair, but it’s unfair in his favor, and purely because Song was willing to go to the mats for him.

    I totally didn’t expect Imane to be loyalty test, but it makes sense. Of course, that means her father probably isn’t alive in Tintagel.

    I’m a bit sad Evander won’t be joining the team, but I’m warming up to Izel.

    Song neatly sidesteps the noose the Yellow Earth prepared for her and makes it in their best interests to keep her secrets. Nice.

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    1. Bighomer's avatar Bighomer

      He gets to pay back the debt, but has to give up all profits after that. Which seems fair to me.

      An interesting note about her father, I didn’t think of that. Could be he’s alive but she’s cut off relations with him for the black, sort of the reverse situation of Angie and her uncle.

      Who knows, maybe Evander is the Vivi equivavlent from One Piece and joins the friends on their voyage toward the end? 😀

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    2. dalek955's avatar dalek955

      Osian is actually allowed to keep the money to pay down his debts, he just won’t ever see a single radiz of it go into his own pockets.

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  8. Bighomer's avatar Bighomer

    I didn’t expect her to be Krypteia, but it makes sense that she stays alive, what with the fourth crippled and the nineteenth gone. All in all I like this resolution, and it leaves room for further loyalty tests down the road to look out for. I think that’s all the loose ends for now? And I hope we get a break from Ivory Tower shenanigans now, since Tristan has passed that part of the internal testing.

    On a side note, since I’m already leaving a comment: the only thing that bothers me so far in Pale Lights is the dialogue sometimes. Especially when it leaves sentences unfinished, followed by a written or implied “but” in the next line. It hasn’t happened in a few chapters, and I get that it’s a bit of a trademark for EE, but it feels too much like the Woe and like I’m still reading the Guide. That takes me out of the story every time, doubly so since it makes for staggered reading anyway.

    Aside from that though, I adore the story and the gang (now with a tinkerer!) and I’m looking forward to the next book, and the journey beyond that!

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  9. Gynedroid's avatar Gynedroid

    My takeaways wrt Imani being Krypteia:

    Despite the reveal that Imani was lying the whole time, I think this means Gwydion is indeed alive and imprisoned. The drawing is one thing, but since there’s no indication Angharad gave a full debrief to the watch of what she witnessed the night of the attack, it’d be very, *very* risky of Imani to make the claim if he had died, and Angharad had witnessed it. Unless she knew for a fact that he was alive.

    add to that and you can’t have a chekov’s gun like Angharad owed a secret way into Tintavel, and it just fits neatly that Imani dangled a true fact in front of her. She was aware of other aspects of the situation, after all – Angharad’s smugglers, for one.

    I wonder if Imani had been well on her way to being inducted into the Krypteia the normal way when Scholomamce opened, which was why she had a more established cover and seeming established process with Hage. And also how many covenant folks – schoolmate or otherwise – are actually Krypteia agents

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