Chapter 2

Song had found Captain Alejandra Krac’s cabin a haven of elegance and learning.

Lined with heavy rows of books and two hung maps – one of the Trebian Sea, the other of Radamant’s Reefs – it boasted simple but pristine furniture and a few personal trinkets. Song had always appreciated that so many in the Watch disdained luxury, like Tianxi officials.

“I must confess Coyol’s works have ever been a chore to me,” Captain Krac noted as she slid the borrowed volume back into the right spot. “His histories of the unification of Izcalli are the most reliable, certainly, but those eschatological tirades grow tiresome.”

The captain was a tall and thick-set woman, with round cheeks and serious gray eyes. She was missing half the fingers on her left hand, bearing intricate wooden prosthetics in their stead, and was nimble enough in their use it was hardly noticeable. Maryam was not nearly so skilled yet.

“I find them worth suffering for the lack of Toxtle partisanship,” Song replied.

The House of Toxtle were the first Aztlan kings to unify most of what was now the Kingdom Izcalli into a single realm, putting an end to the bloody era their scholars called the ‘Rule of Jaguars’. To shore up their delicate position the Toxtle had undertaken a remarkably sophisticated effort to create a cult around themselves, including arranging for historians to present their rise to power as inevitable and ordained by the gods. It was nigh impossible to find a contemporary work not dripping with praises for the mighty, peerlessly righteous House of Toxtle.

Coyol, the third son of a conquered king, had been rather skeptical of this alleged fatefulness and too well connected for the Toxtle to suppress his works.

“Besides,” Song continued, “has there ever been an Izcalli work that did not holler about the coming end of days?”

Captain Krac did not smile, for she was not that kind of woman, but her stern face was faintly touched by rue.

“I suppose if they keep at it long enough they’re bound to be correct eventually,” the captain said. “I would offer you another pick from my shelves, but I fear you would not be able to finish it.”

Song immediately straightened to attention.

“We are soon to arrive, then?”

“It is my navigator’s estimation we will reach Tolomontera by midmorning tomorrow,” Captain Krac confirmed. “We have made good time.”

A hint of pride in the older woman’s voice, not underserved. Even if they had been lucky with the winds the Fair Vistas has recently lost a third of its crew to the Gloam. To exceed expectations in such a situation spoke to a tightly run ship.

“I would suggest you prepare your company for arrival,” the captain said, and it was not a suggestion.

It was a dismissal, and Song took the hint from the very busy woman who had extended her the courtesy of this conversation. She nodded, thanked Captain Krac and retired to the guest quarters. Abrascal had been plotting in a corner with that ever-grinning cook last she saw, which hopefully would keep him and the goddess following him like a playful cat busy for a while still. If she recalled correctly, which she did, Angharad should currently be charming the ship’s fighting contingent.

Effortlessly and in complete ignorance of what she was doing by being so friendly and polite while wiping the floor with everyone in spars. 

She even had a way even with the old sea dogs, those that sneered at anyone spending more than a month a year on land. As for the young men, well, Song suspected the Pereduri would be leaving a broken heart or two behind when they departed tomorrow. Mind you the Tianxi found it difficult to muster sympathy for any boy fool enough to genuinely believe Angharad’s eyes kept flicking to the muscled arms of that Aztlan watchwoman because she was ‘curious about the tattoos’.

Song put a spring to her step, lips still twitching at the utterly transparent excuse the noblewoman had gotten out when teased about her lingering eye.

With the other two members of her cabal occupied, she was now freed to have an overdue conversation with the third. It was to Maryam’s door that her steps took her, for she knew it the signifier’s habit to retire to her cabin for time alone an hour before dinner. Song was early for that, but with Abrascal in the wind she suspected the pale-skinned woman would have retired ahead of the usual.

Song could not blame her. Watchmen were better learned that most in matters of Gloam and Glare, but Maryam was still stared at by much of the crew even after over a week at sea. Open distrust from strangers wearied the soul, no matter how unearned. Two sharp knocks against the door earned only silence, at least until there was the sound of movement behind the door and Maryam called out asking who it was.

“Song,” she replied. “I require a moment from you.”

The Tianxi waited a little longer before the other woman cracked open the door, dark hair disheveled and looking somewhat grumpy. Song cocked an eyebrow but said nothing. Though Maryam insisted she meditated before dinner, it often looked like she’d just woken from a nap when she was interrupted. The pale-skinned woman flicked a glance back and forth across the hallway – more out of habit than distrust, Song suspected – and only then opened the door all the way.

“Come in,” Maryamsaid. “Mind the candles.”

The Triglau moved out of the way and Song entered as bid. All their cabins were the same, the Tianxi had seen when they were assigned, save for Abrascal’s which was in a corner and so slightly more cramped. All held a bed, a trunk, a small table with a stool and a worn dresser. Only Maryam had propped up the table and stool in a corner, laid her blanket on the ground and placed candles in a loose circle around it. Perhaps she trulyhad been meditating, Song mused.

“Will this take long?” Maryam asked. “I can’t afford to burn my way through my allotment.”

“It should not,” Song replied.

Her gaze swept around for a place to sit until she heeded Maryam’s invitation to sit on the edge of the bed.  The other woman stayed standing, leaning back against her dresser. She was, Song only now noticed, barefoot. Silver eyes flicked over the candles, noticing the faint pale hue to their light – Glare-touched, all of them. Interesting. She knew little of signifying, as the Akelarre Guild was tight-fisted with its secrets, but she did know it was an art of the Gloam and not the Glare. Why use such candles, then?

“We will be arriving early tomorrow,” she said.

Maryam grunted in approval.

“Good, I could do with sleeping in a proper Meadow,” she said. “I couldn’t let down my guard an inch on the Dominion, it’s been exhausting.”

The Akelarre Guild was allowed to hold private land on most Watch grounds, Song had learned, in part so that they could build these ‘Meadows’. Their purpose was obscure, save that Navigators rested in them regularly and seemed to count themselves better off for it.

“I imagine the Navigators will have a chapterhouse at the port,” she replied. “Though it is what follows after our arrival I come to speak to you about.”

A pause.

“There has been bickering.”

Maryam cocked an eyebrow.

“There has,” she said. “You should bury the hatchet with Tristan. He’s really quite sweet, you know.”

Song carefully kept her thoughts off her face. Sweet? The man was grenade with a lit fuse. Not once since the scales were ripped from her eyes had Song ever known a god to manifest as often and as clearly as that golden-haired goddess did around Tristan Abrascal. He must be either a madman or halfway to being a Saint, though eerily enough he showed none of the usual signs of incipient sainthood.

Song’s subtle inquiries with some of the Sacromontans during the trials had yielded no recognition for a goddess in the guise of a golden-haired woman in a red dress, which was even more worrying. The easiest way for a god to thrive without being known and willfully worshipped was to have been born of an event so catastrophically momentous it burned in the minds of thousands still.

Which meant Tristan Abrascal likely was a madman riding a calamity god, and though Song would not shy from using him she also had every intention of holding him at arm’s length until he inevitably got himself and quite a few other people killed.

“That is not what I meant,” Song said.

Maryam thinly smiled.

“I know exactly what you meant, Song,” she replied. “That was a warning to keep walking. Best you heed it.”

The Tianxi’s jaw tightened. Maryam was usually an agreeable woman.

“I understand your issues with Angharad’s background, but-”

“No,” Maryam harshly said. “You don’t. You think you do, and I won’t deny the gods dealt your family a hard hand, but you have no fucking understanding of this at all and I will get very angry with you if you ever again pretend otherwise.”

Song’s lips thinned, but she held her tongue. You are stone shaped by the chisel of life, she recited. Will it be your hand wielding the tool, or theirs? If she gave her anger to others, she relinquished the chisel – and that was unacceptable. Maryam’s words were no way to talk to a superior officer, but strictly speaking Song was not that until their cabal was registered.

Moreover, her earlier dealings with the other woman had been along the lines of a partnership without rank involved. It would take time for the adjustment and Uncle Zhuge had warned her that as a rule hierarchy tended to be played loose within cabals.

“We have fights enough waiting for us,” Song finally said. “Can you, at least, cease provoking her?”

Maryam’s face closed down like a house come winter, and she knew immediately she had made a mistake.

“So you’ve decided to change ships now that you no longer need me,” Maryam stiffly said. “Fine. Best I knew it now, I suppose..”

Song stiffened at the accusation.

“I have done no such thing,” she said.

“Have you had this talk with Tredegar?” the Triglau smiled.

There was no joy in it.

“I intended to-”

“That’s a no,” Maryam cut through. “Allow me to be clear, Song: she gets no apology from me for the discomfort of being reminded her people treat mine like chattel. And Stripe candidate or not, you are in no position to make me.”

Song met her eyes, for anger was a personal matter but not so a challenge to authority. If that stone cracked there would be no mending it – and Song would not be captain of their cabal in name only. She kept her voice clear, calm, free of anger. Hand on the chisel.

“A direct order from a captain,” she said, “is not refused without consequence.”

“There’s no ink on paper yet, Song,” Maryam replied. “And even when there is, we both know that there can be transfers to other cabals – without or without your captain’s permission. If I don’t stick around, do you think Tristan will?”

Even one departure might be the death knell of a cabal as small as theirs, Song thought, but two would be for certain. A cabal must count four students or be dissolved, and while perhaps one departure could be replaced in time two would cause questions to be asked. If Song stuck with Angharad they would no doubt find another cabal willing to take the both of them in, but that could not be. She needed it to be her name on the reports – Captain Song Ren – or there was no point to any of this.

It was not a threat without teeth but going belly up now would be the end of her captaincy before it even began. No one obeyed an officer they’d bent. Song measured her words, matched anger to need and found the right stride. She could not slip, not even a moment.

“You would peddle a murderous street rat with a rampant god and a Triglau signifier who can only use Autarchic Signs,” Song evenly. “Do you think it would take me more than half an hour’s work to make it so that not a cabal on Tolomontera would be willing to touch either of you even with plague gloves on?”

“I can do more than that,” Maryam hissed.

“Not well,” Song bluntly replied. “Now, let me be clear, I do not want to do this. There is no gain to be had. But if you set out to do me harm, Maryam, I will answer by throwing a torch at every single bridge you’ve so much as glanced at.”

She sneered back, but the Tianxi knew it a front. Maryam had reasons to want to attend Scholomance just as urgent as Song’s own. Now she had laid out the consequences, made it clear that an attack would be met with worse. She must now make it clear there were no chains, that she was not cornering Maryam either. A house with a lock that only one man may open is called a prison, Master Shijian had written.

“If you truly want to part ways, I will not keep you. I only require that we proceed in a civilized manner,” Song continued. “We will arrange a trade with a cabal suiting you and settle the matter without harm to either party.”

Now to address the accusation. She leaned forward, face intent.

“I came to speak to you on matters of bickering first because I have known you to be level-headed and because your provocations are purposeful,” Song continued. “Angharad Tredegar gives offense by accident, Maryam. It does not excuse her, and she is not excused, but it does mean it shall take more than a single polite conversation to begin curtailing the issue.”

She met Maryam’s blue eyes.

“Do we now understand each other, Maryam Khaimov?”

The two matched gazes for a long moment before the Triglau looked away.

“I grew angry too quickly,” Maryam finally said.

“And I approached the matter poorly,” Song acknowledged.

She had underestimated the delicacy of the matter, thinking of the other woman’s level-headedness as an absolute instead of a choice. She had broken zunyan, if only by accident. Maryam passed a hand through her long dark locks, letting out a sigh. The other woman looked tired, Song decided. There had always been rings around her eyes, but they seemed darker now.

“I’ll try to refrain from pulling at her tail too much,” Maryam said. “But if she so much as-”

“I would not expect you to answer an insult with silence,” she cut in. “Nor will I ask.”

Maryam let out a noise that might have passed for agreement and the silver-eyed woman decided it would have to do. She rose from the bed, then hesitated a moment. No, it could wait. She nodded at Maryam, but the Triglau frowned at her.

“Your hand,” she said, extending hers.

“I was not going to ask,” Song stiffly said.

She was not so thick-skinned as to request a favor after an argument.

“I’m still angry with you,” Maryam bluntly said, “but not enough to risk your health. Your hand, Song.”

The Tianxi cleared her throat, somewhat embarrassed, and gave it. Maryam’s fingers clasped her own and the signifier closed her eyes. A moment passed then Song felt a faint ripple go up her arm – like a shiver, hair-raising and swiftly gone. Maryam let out a long breath, opening her eyes and releasing Song’s hand.

“The concentration is nearing dangerous again,” Maryam said. “Did you purge at all while on the Dominion?”

Song’s lips thinned.

“Twice,” she said. “Once during the Trial of Lines and again after we reached Three Pines.”

“You might be at a high tide, then,” Maryam said.

The Tianxi smothered a grimaced. That or the curses were gathering quicker.

“Purge tonight,” Maryam advised. “The salt in sea water should make you harder to reach but there’s still a risk.”

Song nodded and gave her thanks. A look at the candles told her that their conversation had lasted longer than anticipated and perhaps to Maryam’s material detriment. Song barely used her own candles, given her eyes, so it should be a fitting apology to gift the other woman most of her allotment after dinner. The Tianxi took her leave, briskly heading for her own rooms. There should be time enough for a purge before dinner, though she would look tired afterwards. Still, better to do it early than late. She tended to get nightmares if she did it too close to falling asleep.

Locking the door behind her, Song took from her bag a green pouch and a wooden bowl. First she untied the strings on the silken pouch, carefully spilling some of the salt to trace a circle on the floor. She would have to buy more soon, she was nearly out. She would make a note in her ledger. Then came the bowl, a simple wooden piece whose insides were blackened as if sprayed with acid. Song filled the bowl with her water jug, then stepped inside the salt circle and sat down cross-legged.

The bowl she set down at her side, and after taking a long breath dipped the fingers of her left hand in the water. She closed her eyes and focused on her breathing. In and out, letting her senses trail off until there was nothing but her breath and the dark.

And, after an eternity, there was the smell.

Like offal, like rot and hate and shame made into a stick of incense. Song forced herself to ignore it, to focus on the steadiness of her breathing. It was only when her fingers were touching the dried bottom of the bowl that she opened her eyes again. There was not a drop of water left in the bowl, and fresh black scarring from the curses she had purged from her body.

When she had been a girl the purge was only needed once every few years, but nowadays it was twice a month. It was getting worse with every season, for an endless sea of hatred and misery was being poured into the Gloam by every Tianxi who’d lost to the Dimming.

By all those lips the name Ren was snarled as a curse, until it had become exactly that.

Song slumped, suddenly exhausted, and allowed herself a moment of bitterness at the unfairness of it all. She had not even been born. But only a moment, and then she put herself back together piece by piece. Like putting on formal dress, layer by layer until she was armored against the world. Song was not her brothers: she would not let the weight of duty break her back as it had theirs.

Song Ren would wield the chisel and she would win.

Come early morning on the morrow they were all sent to their rooms by First Mate Javier, who instructed them to stay inside until told otherwise. Song and Maryam, better learned on the subject of Scholomance than the other two, guessed why without difficulty.

“We are soon to reach the Ring of Storms, then?” Maryam asked.

The tall, exceedingly mustachioed – all Lierganen seemed convinced that nailing an entire ferret above their upper lip was somehow distinguished – officer nodded.

“We have the clouds in sight,” the first mate said. “Any moment now we’ll be hitting the storm front.”

“Ring of Storms,” Abrascal repeated, eyebrows raised. “Now there’s an ominous name. Might I ask what it is?”

“A ring of storms,” First Mate Javier drawled back. “There is one encircling Tolomontera, which must be crossed to reach our destination. There’s no need to worry – it is barely a mile wide, we have sailed through worse – but obviously we can’t have you underfoot during a storm.”

“Of course,” Tristan Abrascal smiled, nodding low.

Song’s eyes shortly dipped to the golden-haired woman standing by his side, whispering in his ear something that made the man’s jaw tighten ever so slightly. The Tianxi wrenched her gaze away immediately, though, for twice now the goddess had almost caught her looking and she would rather keep the details of her contract hidden. As usual, Abrascal was a headache.

Song breathed out, tightened her grip around the chisel. That was not impartial. The deity’s presence was, however, taxing in how it forced her to pretend blindness. It was one reason she avoided Abrascal, and why he sometimes irked her more than he strictly deserved to. If at least she could hear the goddess Song might have a notion of what manner of entity she was dealing with, but for now she could only try to sketch out the deity’s machinations through her mortal hand’s deeds.

“May I request being told when we’ve passed the Ring?” Song asked. “I would not want to miss the sights.”

“It’ll be your first time, won’t it?” the first mate mused. “Fair enough, the works are certainly worth a look. I’ll see about sending you a man.”

She duly thanked the officer before he took his leave and they retired to their cabins as ordered.

Song had been disposed to wait patiently but found herself restless. She could have gotten ahead in her correspondence, but writing in a storm would only lead to spilled ink and unintelligible characters. She had already folded her clothes twice and checking on her pack one more time held little appeal. If she’d had a book she could have made use of the time, but as things stood it felt like she was throwing away hours.

Pacing back and forth did not help.

Eventually she sat on the bed she would have remade regardless and made to practice Feng’s List. As one of the first scholar-diplomats the Republics sent to Malan, An Feng had written several of the definitive texts on learning Umoya. Feng’s List was a highly respected speaking exercise, a series of words that helped the speaker learn Umoya’s three tones and six accents.

“Muthi,” Song carefully enunciated, burying herself into the exercise.

It kept her mind from drifting until the ship began rocking from the storm. Her voice weakened as her hands tightened against the sheets. What this what it would feel like, to be a head of cabbage in a cart tumbling downhill? Utterly powerless, at the mercy of a pile of wooden planks held together by nails that, right now, felt all too small. She forced herself to continue Feng’s List, and when she finished it to start again. And then again, until the storm passed.

She was not certain how long it took, save that however short a span it might have been it had still taken all too long. Yet fairer weather prevailed, and as the rocking calmed there was a quiet knock at her door. The first mate had sent a sailor, as promised, and Song felt so relieved to be allowed out that she had to force herself to wait and remake the bed instead. Hand on the chisel.

She climbed to the bridge once she was better composed, finding it wet and smelling of salt but filled with cheerful crew. The crossing must have gone well. The forecastle was nearly deserted, so Song took the stairs up and found a spot out of the way to lean against the railing. The Tianxi stayed there in silence, savoring the gentle stir of the wind against her hair. The earlier nerves bled out drop by drop, leaving her sagging against the wood until she remembered she was still out in the open.

She recognized Angharad by the sound of her steps, which were oddly cadenced. Not sharp like a soldier’s or with a sailor’s lurching swagger but something closer to a fencer’s gait, light and ever ready to spring into movement. Angharad made a noise upon catching sight of her, then came to join her at the railing. The tall Pereduri’s elbows came down, coat sweeping back as she put her weight on the wood. Nodding a greeting – which Song returned – the other woman smiled and cast a curious look ahead. The Tianxi cocked a questioning eyebrow.

“You had me curious,” Angharad said.

A look at the horizon, then she snorted.

“Still do, in fact. It will be hours yet before we reach Tolomontera, what is it that you would look for on the horizon?”

“We’ve left behind the last clouds of the Ring of Storms,” Song said. “Soon we should catch our first glimpse of the Grand Orrery.”

Angharad rocked along with the rocking of the galleon without even noticing, the Tianxi noted. She envied her that comfort: though not prone to seasickness, Song would never be at ease standing on a rickety hunk of wood surrounded by angry water as far as the eye could see. She found it difficult to understand how seafarers could be so fond of a life where no amount of skill or valor would make a whit of difference if the day’s luck decided you were to capsize and drown.

“I have never heard of this Grand Orrery,” Angharad said. “An Antediluvian wonder?”

Song nodded.

“Some say it is the very reason for the existence of the Ring of Storms, that it tames wind and weather the rest of the way to Tolomontera by pushing out all the wildness onto the Ring,” she said. “I do not know if this is true, but it was described to me as a wonder like no other.”

The Pereduri cocked an eyebrow.

“Is an orrery not some sort of mechanical map mimicking the movement of the stars?” she said. “Something not so dissimilar was built on the ceiling above the Trial of Ruins, you might recall. I struggle to believe another such device would be all that exceptional.”

Song smiled.

“You will not struggle long,” she said, and a glance at the horizon saw her smile widen. “There, we see the first of it.”

The Tianxi pointed at a distant silver light near the line of the horizon, Angharad marking the sight with a skeptical look.

“It seems to me you point a star, Song,” she said.

“I do not,” she replied. “Look closer.”

The noblewoman did, frowning but trying to understand what she might have missed. It was Angharad Tredegar’s willingness to learn that had settled the matter of who she should recruit. The mirror-dancer would not entertain the thought that nobility was fundamentally unjust – she did not know the principle of zunyan, that partiality in dignity was a violation of the Circle – but that inflexibility did not extend to her actions. Angharad admitted her faults and tried to mend them, a rare thing regardless of birth or what land one hailed from.

The troubles with Isabel Ruesta had almost made Song reconsider her choice, for she would not yoke herself to someone whose every principle bent for a pretty face, but there had admittedly been… extenuating circumstances. Besides, the past was now buried.

Unlike Isabel, who’d had to do with being tossed onto a campfire.

“It moves too quickly,” Angharad suddenly said. “Stars are too far for us to easily grasp their movements, but this one’s can be caught by the naked eye.”

“It is not a star,” Song agreed. “It is a light large as a manse being moved by machinery. I expect within a quarter-hour we’ll be seeing the first ring.”

They stayed together on the deck, small lengths of conversation split by lengths of comfortable silence, as more and more lights joined that first silver pinprick – which grew larger and larger as the ship approached. The sailor in the crow’s nest shouted something that sounded like ‘first ring’in mangled Antigua, her warning before they got their first real glimpse of the Grand Orrery.

Churning white waters came first, and then they saw that from the depths of the Trebian Sea rose a massive circle of gold angled to the side.

There were two of them, in truth, with a slight space between. Each was broad as a man was long and slowly turning. It was a sight surreal, seeming more a monster than a machine for all that Song the truth was otherwise.

“Sleeping God,” Angharad murmured, sound awed. “How large is that ring?”

“The diameter should be at least four hundred miles long,” Song said. “There are several more, all of them orbiting a device at the heart of Tolomontera.”

As the ship sailed closer false stars bloomed one after another, gargantuan golden rings moving the great orbs of colored light – blue, silver, green and gold and a dozen colors more – according to some eldritch purpose. Like jewels set in a crown the lights were shepherded by rings of differing sizes and angles and make. Some were delicate, eerily delicate like steel wire the size of tower, others like thick bands of gold. It was half an hour more of staring in wonder as the crew busied themselves around them before the pair saw their first light up close.

The colors were trapped inside magnificently intricate globes of gold and brass, as finely wrought as lace and varied in shape. Some looked almost like spinning tops, others like spheres tightly trapped in bands of brass and one was but an intricate hollow ring. None were smaller than a great mansion, and all cast their light towards the heart of the device. In the distance lay a massive tower of gears, broad at the base and thinning at the middle only to bloom into an impossibly complex flower of machinery at the summit. Colors flicked inside panes of glass, like storms caught in bottles.

The heart of the Grand Orrery, the lights of Scholomance.

“A wonder like no other,” Angharad murmured. “You spoke true enough, Song.”

“Tolomontera is not so great a sight, I fear,” Song replied. “But keep some of that awe tucked away, as I expect Scholomance will be just as astonishing a sight.”

She patted the other woman’s shoulder and retired, leaving Angharad to stare at the horizon. Soon enough they would be in sight of their destination, and before they did the Tianxi intended on checking her pack one last time. Song would not be caught unprepared by what was to come.

The man’s hair was permanently scruffy, so there was no bed hair to use in telling if he’d truly napped through the storm or if his clothes were habitually rumpled.

“One of these days,” Tristan Abrascal said, “you’re going to have to tell me where you’re getting all these maps.”

“Doubtful,” Song replied without missing a beat.

Were she a more poetic soul, Song might have mused over any uniform being put on Abrascal’s stringy body somehow turning messy as a reflection of his soul’s mutinous streak. As it was, instead she fantasized about him being put through a laundry wringer so the rolling pins might iron out every wrinkle and at least some of the terrible ideas waiting behind those gray eyes.

Ambushed by the man on her way back from her cabin, the Tianxi had been presented with an unfortunately reasonable request which had led her right back in it – and now to be pressing down the edges of a slip of paper against the top of her dresser.

Far from offended, Abrascal’s face creased in amusement at her dismissal. It was discomforting how untroubled he seemed by everything, and how closely that matched the Fangzi Yongtu’s description of a man with rules but no principles. You will know them thus: they neither exalt nor condemn, wandering the land without knowledge of the righteous and unrighteous. Like animals they will feed on benefits and flee calamity, heeding no dignity but their own.

Father would have called him a shady bastard instead, which was somewhat less of a mouthful.

Song followed Abrascal gaze as he stared down at the sketched map of Tolomontera – little more than sketched lines – and wondered what it was he was looking for. Seen from above, the island of looked like a fat-heeled boot inclined slightly upwards.

Its southern shoreline ran from the northwest to the southeast in a diagonal cut, all stony beaches and grassy lowlands leading up into increasingly steep hills and finally plateaus – the Ariadnis Tablelands – that were a maze of deep ravines and caverns. Near the collar of the ‘boot’ tall mountains rose, swallowing up about a third of Tolomontera, and atop these squatted the massive silhouette of the Grand Orrery’s heart. It was in that great clockwork spire’s shadow, due south, that lay the hulking shape of Scholomance.

The ancient school fed straight into Port Allazei, which covered most of the boot’s heel and where the Fair Vistas was headed.

“Unless there are farms on the plateaus, that island can’t feed itself,” Abrascal finally noted. “And that port is much too large to still be inhabited.”

“The Watch keeps a presence on the island, but it is otherwise abandoned,” Song acknowledged.

“So we’re looking at an empty ruin of a port city,” Abrascal grunted. “That could into either a blessing or a curse, depending on how we play things.”

Why, Song silently deplored, must it be only this one that showed interest in planning ahead? She would have preferred the quality in another.

“Once we have registered, our priority should be securing provisions and lodgings,” she acknowledged.

Then Abrascal could find out who was trying to sell him, Maryam could get that sleep she seemed in dire need of and Angharad could be sat down for a conversation about how her family’s exploits at sea had likely been funded by slave trade gold and that meant she must watch her words around someone whose kin might well have been sold to fund Tredegar glories.

Then she could begin seeing to her own affairs, which were ever too many.

“Food and a hiding place, huh,” Abrascal grinned. “Why, Mistress Ren, we’ll make a rat out of you yet.”

Ugh. And to think Maryam genuinely found him charming. There was no accounting for taste.

“We may not have much time before classes begin,” Song told him, ignoring the grin. “If so, we will split off to get everything done in time.”

The dark-haired rat leaned forward, rubbing his chin.

“Am I getting Tredegar or Maryam?” he asked.

She would grant that the man was not slow on the uptake. Only a fool would have thought it a sound notion to partner those two if they were to split into pairs.

“You would be comfortable working with Angharad?” she asked.

Though strangely enough he looked aggrieved, Abrascal nodded. Good. She had expected those two to be at odds, but they were cordial enough. That Maryam would be half her trouble was a thoroughly unpleasant surprise.

“I will likely put the two of you on provisions,” Song said. “We’ll see after we dock.”

Between she and Maryam they should be able to sniff out anything too dangerous while choosing a place to stay. Meanwhile Abrascal would ensure that Angharad was not robbed on prices and she would ensure he didn’t get robbed period. The street rat nodded, brow creasing in thought. They were finished with the map, so she tucked it away and politely stated they were done with her rooms.

Soon they would be in sight of Tolomontera, and though Maryam was napping Angharad would be on the deck waiting for them. Abrascal did not object and they headed up together. She found Angharad on the forecastle earlier and the three settled there – the Sacromontan asked about the Pereduri’s experience at sea, as surprised as Song when Angharad revealed it was precious little.

Though she had, apparently, been trained to duel on a ship’s deck in the bay just beyond her family manor.

“The trick is to move with the waves,” she explained. “The footing must be looser than usual.”

Song did not quite have the heart to explain that her advice would be largely useless to anyone who had not spent most of their life refining the art of war. Abrascal was nodding regularly with a fixed smile on his face, for example. And though Song herself had begun the standard training of Jigong militia at the age of ten – and insisted on being taught the sword as well as the spear, against tradition for women – she would admit to being somewhat lost as well.

She had preferred firearms even before her contract ensured she would be a deadly shot.

Silver eyes scanned the distance and there she found what she was looking for. She might not see perfectly in the dark, but she saw at least as well as any darkling – the horizon was not the stretch of black for her it would be to the others.

“Straight ahead,” Song said, drawing Angharad out of some complicated hand movement. “We arrive.”

Her belly clenched in anticipation, for it was on these approaching grounds that her life’s work was to begin, but when she first glimpsed Tolomontera she found there was no room left for nerves. A hundred times Song must have surveyed the worn sketch of a map she’d obtained from Uncle Zhuge, but it did not prepare her for the true sight of it in the slightest.

It was, she thought, as a drunken scholar’s description of the likeness of an island. Rising above the waves Port Allazei with its long, thin stone jetties looked like some city of the dead – vines, grass and trees had returned to reign when men left. The lights of false stars swept in intricate cycles of colored night and day, slices of silver and green claiming swaths of ruin while behind the lichyard city waited the hungry silhouette of Scholomance.

Its great dome loomed tall, surrounded by a cluster of lesser ones and towers enough for a dozen cities – all laced with tall arched bridges and connected by strange, winding rooftops. Hardly a light was lit within the ancient palace, but it hardly mattered for squatting above on tall mountains the Grand Orrery unfolded like the open arms of some sky-swallowing god. Lights flickered and roiled, clouds drifting lazily below as its gears turned and turned without respite.

Song trusted her own eyes, they were of all the world the only thing she would never doubt, but even staring at Tolomontera she could not quite bring herself to believe the island was real. Not until the galleon docked, nestled gently against the stone jetty, and her hand found the chisel again.

There was work to do.

44 thoughts on “Chapter 2

    1. Earl of Purple's avatar Earl of Purple

      They are not true stars, but a mix of ancient glowing machinery on the ceiling, small cracks of Glare and perhaps other things. I am guessing false stars are not on the roof and perhaps dip down rather than remain a fixed distance away.

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    2. Abnaxis's avatar Abnaxis

      I’ve mentioned before, but the world itself doesn’t make sense if it’s really underground.

      As presented, the people believe that they live underground to get away from searing heat from the glare. However, there are rainstorms–which happen on the surface because the upper atmosphere is colder than the surface, that shouldn’t be true for
      Vesper as presented. Nearly all of the not-touched-by-spirits fauna we’ve run into are terrestrial creatures not adapted for perpetual darkness, like spiders and horses. Even among the touched-by-spirits creatures hunt mostly by sight. There are forests with trees that have leaves in a world where photosynthesis can’t happen. Cities laid out in districts with streets and buildings just like ours. And so on…

      EE is not the sort of author to let these sort of incongruities exist unmentioned in their settings, so I highly suspect there will be a reveal at some point that the world is not as it seems, because otherwise it doesn’t make sense.

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  1. arcanavitae15's avatar arcanavitae15

    Lore for the Lore Throne!

    Maryam and Song’s argument was interesting, also holy shit Angharad is so bad at talking to people that she almost broke the cabal by accident.
    Also Song notices Fortuna which is interesting, and it’s possible Fortuna is a Calamity God which would be very fitting.

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  2. CantankerousBellerophan's avatar CantankerousBellerophan

    It is time and past time that Angharad begin learning the price of her honor. Good thing Song is the one to step into the role of person who disabuses a grieving mostly child of her false impressions of her dead family.

    We recently left a world where stories were iron physical law. We seem to have entered into one where spite is instead. It doesn’t sound like a deliberate ritual, what was done to Song. Her family is cursed by many for the sins of its forebears, and so it is cursed in fact by the Gloam. The creation of mass injustice through the world’s own laws.

    Unless, of course, that is not the case. Countless enslaved souls must have cursed the Queen Eternal, but it does not appear to have harmed her. The nobility of Scromonte must be cursed by the entirety of the Murk, and yet they remain in good health. Perhaps it is only an effect which manifests on the scale of nations, but it could also be Song is simply wrong about what was done to her family.

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    1. Passerby's avatar Passerby

      I would expect what’s happened to song’s family if indeed a curse is a matter of scale. the dimming from what I recall destroyed one of the irreplaceable wonders providing light to a sizable fraction (7, 12? something like that) of a large nation. it is a calamity that has been ongoing since before song’s birth. by comparison, the queen perpetual and the nobility of sacremonte have likely never caused as much simultaneous suffering. They may have caused more overall but likely spread out over a larger number of people committing the acts (lackey’s also taking blame) and a longer period of time, though I imagine that will change the longer the wonder is broken.

      the effect also sounds somewhat like a large group unconsciously manipulates the gloam into a collective instinctual working. frankly, it has me more curious about how the gloam and signs work, and whether anyone can theoretically learn to consciously manipulate it

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      1. lysDexicsUntie's avatar lysDexicsUntie

        From the sound of it conscious manipulation of the Gloam is exactly what the Navigators are doing with the Signs.

        It would seem anyone could learn Signs, but the knowledge isn’t common (likely the Navigators or anyone else in the know isn’t keen to share) and actual skill level may vary. Not to mention it sounds like experimentation could be dangerous considering how Leander lost his arm…

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    2. zlz's avatar zlz

      Slaves might curse the malanis as a whole or their specific slaver, but would their hatred be so focused on a single individual? For every time a slave curses the queen perpetual, there is likely a citizen or courtier praising her to balance it out. I think that’s why Song is so focused on her name being the one on the reports: should she achieve enough, the recognition might grow to counteract the curse.

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      1. More like the Iscariots, maybe, ironically enough.

        I still wonder what exact meaning that name holds in this world, and why the Accords are called that.

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  3. morroian's avatar morroian

    Interesting change to POV although I enjoy Tristan’s and Angharad’s more. Its also very interesting that Song can see Fortuna.

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    1. Passerby's avatar Passerby

      it is interesting and sheds a somewhat different light on what was said by Song about her contract in book 1 chapter 36. I do believe that song misled about the nature of her sight. I don’t think she can read the contract somehow, I believe she meant decipher as in interpret rather than read, that is she doesn’t see the contract, she sees the effect it has with details others do not see. speaking of the number of languages she’s learned feels like misdirection now knowing she can see gods and also that she doesn’t seem to know what Tristan’s god does. also, I wonder if Tristan has ever used his contract in sight of song, I think it would lend some credence that she has to see the contract used to decipher, be it deciphering text or the effects of the contract itself

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  4. I know just the right medicine for your trouble, Song – a copious amount of murders, life or death situations, planning, cooperation, and talking around meals. Once the trouble starts, you’ll be too busy trying to help each other survive – and in turn adding to the chance of your survival, to be bothered with your troubles. You guys would be forced to become best friends soon enough. Or you can’t get over it, break the team, get murdered, and never achieve your objectives. Honestly, it is their choice after all. Be friends or die that is the question

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  5. Until this day, it irks me terribly how people tend to just attack someone’s background first. It is, IMO, the lowest form of insult to a person. As if they have nothing to attack the other morals, characters, conducts, etc that they have to resort to insulting the one thing no one can change. The trend appears in recent trashy romance or novels, the comments are filled with how noble and how high-born the main characters are or how a little scum should just “know their places”. Like, yall can attack everything from the dubious morals of the antagonists to the horrible actions that they did but you can’t dismiss someone on their background. It perfectly sums up the level of writing these novels are capable of. You can’t write someone with actual virtues and noble so you write someone who is born in the nobility, you can’t write a competent MC so you write incompetent antagonists, you can’t think of a way to the antagonist despicable so you give him the lowest birth. These are the type to answer “Yes” unironically to the question “Are kings and nobles given their high status by birth?”.

    And seeing someone like Song emphasizing Tristan’s background as a mark against him is like seeing those same people. It is like Song has never met a single good rat or just simply struggling people, before. It just shows how large the gap between the social class is that a foreigner from a completely different society can judge someone they barely met based on their status.

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    1. Abnaxis's avatar Abnaxis

      How is Song weaponizing Tristan’s background against him? Everything she doesn’t like about him is based on how he conducts himself and on the fact that Fortuna is constantly manifested around him–which Francho brought up earlier as believed by the foremost scholars to be impossible without either draining Tristan’s soul or turning him into a Saint.

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      1. I just simply dislike Song and her uncharitable thought on Tristan, especially the part about his rat-ness. Was she trying to imply that because he is a rat, he is shady, deranged and potentially dangerous or was he just adding him being a rat into the repertoire of things she dislike about Tristan? Regardless of interpretation, it still seems a little classist from Song especially when Tristan never went out of his way to do anything to Song and they haven’t even interacted that much. It is also weird that she hated that Tristan tried to think long-term and would think highly of anyone else who does that.

        Song can dislike Tristan because sometimes people just don’t get along. I can also dislike Song for her uncharitable thought. I haven’t made any concrete judgement on her yet and I am gonna wait for future chapter and see what kind of person Song is. However, my current opinion of her is leaning toward her having minor classist views and attitudes. I did said “might” on Song not “certainly” so there is that

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      2. Earl of Purple's avatar Earl of Purple

        @vuthuha912: What Song hates about Tristan planning ahead is that she sees it as a virtue, and she wants to hate him. She hates that he alone of her cabal-to-be is so interested in the future. She doesn’t hate him because he’s looking to the future, there; she hates him because he’s showing a virtue that clashes with her read of him.

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    2. IDKWhoitis's avatar IDKWhoitis

      I think Song’s emotional reaction to Tristan is one out of paranoia and deflection more than anything.

      She likes Angharad and Maryam, and wants to be the leader of the cabal, but Tristan poses the most serious threat to that. He has wormed his way into Maryam’s heart, and found leverage points to maneuver around and with Angharad. Song has info that he should be an ever present danger with the manifestation of a god, but he has confounded expectations by being political, silver tongued, quiet, and hand picked for the Spy Department. He has main character written all over him.

      So Song must wrestle for control and influence with someone she doesnt know or trust, and tries to find ways hes unqualified. (This is where her commentary about his abilities, personality, and danger come in)

      But he exceeds those expectations too, because he’s thoughtful, a planner, can read the strengths and weaknesses of the cabal, and knows how to compose the team for success. Things that Song feels should be her role due to her Enhanced vision, insider knowledge, and background of having trained for something like this long before him.

      And she feels like she’s losing somehow, which makes her hate his guts. Because her criticism of him is a double edged sword, because even with her perfection and advantages, she isnt winning undisputably. Worst yet, because of her curse, she needs this. Song thinks she cant bend or she will break, so she will never admit that weakness or ask.

      We’ll see if desperation mends their relationship.

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  6. greycat's avatar greycat

    I wasn’t expecting a new viewpoint character! Good to meet you, Song. It’s also great that we immediately learn her ultimate goal — to get her name out in the world in a positive light, to counteract the infamy that has become a literal series of curses.

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  7. lysDexicsUntie's avatar lysDexicsUntie

    Song’s concerns about Tristan and Fortuna are utterly reasonable and really the only logical conclusion one could draw about the situation, but completely wrong. Which makes it so much worse that she is wasting such a useful asset because of them.

    The fact that previously the Aztlan fell under the Rule of Jaguars is quite interesting considering I believe Tupoc belongs to the Jaguar Society.

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    1. Crash's avatar Crash

      Eh, the way she thinks about Tristan though.

      She takes every opportunity to take a potshot at Tristan’s appearance and background. He’s scruffy, his clothes are rumpled, he’s a street rat, a criminal.

      It kinda undermines her points, is she worried about Fortuna and what she wants or just relieved she can have a legitimate reason to complain about him to others? Hells, he goes to her to look at a map and plan ahead and she can’t resist complaining that he did it at all.

      She thinks about Fortuna far less often than the other things, even when she does think of it she’s busy calling Tristan a madman. Not once did she speak to him of this, or anything really, even as she intends for them to form a Cabal and depend on each other. Maryam suggests she talk to him and is immediately dismissed.

      Song calls him Abrascal, even as she uses mostly first names to think of the other two, to keep him at arm’s length even in her own head.

      It’s kinda wild, given Song Ren knows very well what t means to be judged for things you have not done.

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      1. This might be an overgeneralization but Song could be … a classist. Zhuge is a very famous family name while Song is the name of several dynasty in China. Thus, Song might comes from a scholarly aristocratic family.

        Though, the most famous member of the Zhuge family irl life – Zhuge Liang was not a classist. Zhuge Liang was a farmer before he served Liu Bei. who, despite being descendants of a prince, was very poor. Zhuge Liang and Liu Bei are closer to Tristan in background and frankly personality and morals than Song and her family . Ironic isn’t it?

        I wonder how much similarity there is between China and Tianxi because everyone in the Sinosphere all knows the famous saying: “It doesn’t matter where the hero came from” or “Are kings and nobles given their high status by birth?”. I would really hate for a character who came from a culture inspired by another real culture which is full with stories of how anyone regardless of birth can rise above their station as long as they tried hard, to be an actual classist in the end.

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      2. Passerby's avatar Passerby

        song’s PoV gives me the vibes of a lifetime politician from a family of politicians. A Noble in behaviour if not in name, and I think it’s clouding her judgement somewhat and being exacerbated by fortuna being an unknown deity with no known worship who is continually around Tristan. things that she associates with a god born of calamity and a contractor on the edge of becoming a saint.
        for all she notices that Angharad needs to learn some hard truths about her unconscious thoughts, methinks song needs to as well.

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      3. Crash's avatar Crash

        That sounds about right. The Ren family was probably some sort of political powerhouse to have had enough access to something so important and break it not nobles per say, the Tianxi don’t like the existence of the title but as Yong said “the man who doesn’t love gold has yet to be born” so clearly, there are still levers to be pulled.

        Song herself has knowledge of many languages, she may well have learned on her own but tutoring is quite possible; and she claims she was trained in swords, against protocol, which requires either political power or private tutoring. The family may have fallen on hard times but it’s possible some of the money yet remains, it would be hard to keep themselves fed while being pariahs such as they are unless they aren’t recognized by face, only by name.

        Being from an ex-rich family explains very neatly why she didn’t quite process she was asking Maryam to overlook chattel slavery and why she talks about Tristan the way she does.

        She even gets a moment of clarity in which she thinks her reading is not impartial but goes back to it.

        It may be that Fortuna is exacerbating the underlying predisposition.

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      4. Abnaxis's avatar Abnaxis

        I feel like you guys are putting a lot of words into Song’s mouth that aren’t there.

        Tristan’s hair isn’t scruffy because he’s a Sacromintan rat, it’s scruffy because he didn’t pull a comb through it. His clothes aren’t rumpled because he’s from the lower class, they’re rumpled because he didn’t bother to fold or press them.

        Song focuses on those details because she is hyper clean and detail-oriented, unwilling to leave her room if her bed is even slightly wrinkled from sitting on the edge of it. She’s a neat freak; it wouldn’t matter to her if Tristan was wearing rags or silks if he took the time to tidy them up before he left his room.

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      5. Crash's avatar Crash

        Oh no, Tristan is scruffy. He is as a Sacromonte rat by his own admission. He’s very happy about his hat that is at least a decade out of fashion.

        The way Song constantly goes back to thinking about him and focusing on his appearance is real too, though.

        She has a dislike of the man based on no direct personal knowledge of him and she doesn’t quite intend to revise that (as of right now). She claims it’s because pretending blindness near Fortuna is a headache, but there’s a very clear line in her head in how she thinks about Abrascal (never Tristan, even tough he very clearly didn’t want to use this name during the Trials) and Angharad or Maryam.

        Song herself recognizes this, it’s a thing. It’ll be fun to watch it develop, now that they have to work together in a small team.

        Going forward it would be cool if Song’s chapter are noticeably more detail orientated due to her personality (in this very chapter, she mentioned how she keeps redoing cleaning and checking her pack or other such things, for example), much like Tristan and Angharad’s chapters focus on different details, for example. This is an indication of how each character thinks and it’s pretty great.

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      6. Abnaxis's avatar Abnaxis

        “The way Song constantly goes back to thinking about him and focusing on his appearance is real too, though.”

        Right. Tristan is very slovenly, and Song is extremely regimented. That is leading to conflict.

        However, she ISN’T sniping at him for his”background,” which is what everyone keeps going on about by making presumptions about how Song being hypocritically classist.

        All of Song’s misgivings toward Tristan directly related to how lackadaisical he is, plus the danger inherent in him having Fortuna around all the time. His class/birth/origins have nothing to do with it

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      7. Dwalker120's avatar Dwalker120

        This is such a buckwild misreading of Song’s hypocritical classism that I genuinely am not sure how you could believe this. And you accuse OTHERS of putting words in the characters mouth? Lol

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      8. It’s really a particularly delicious bit of hypocrisy on her part, that she’s making a habit of always going out of her way to think of everything Tristan does in the worst possible light, to the point that even if he’s expressing virtues it becomes a bad thing because he’s the one doing so, while she had no issue harshly judging Angharad for the exact same habit with Isabel Ruesta, just in the opposite direction.

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  8. asazernik's avatar asazernik

    More evidence in Song’s observations that Fortuna is a deeply strange god. Or perhaps just that Tristan’s relationship with her is odd.

    Did some of the Cerdans’ experiments splash onto him?

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      1. Crash's avatar Crash

        That would be quite something wouldn’t it?

        But then, is her predisposition to goad Tristan into low odds with big payoff a farce or is it an indication that whatever happened is a series of events so improbably unlikely it manifests itself as the Lady of Long Odds?

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      2. Abnaxis's avatar Abnaxis

        Tupoc said he tried to kill Tristan because Tristan offends his god because his living defies the order of the universe.

        I’m wondering if, because Fortuna feeds on”long odds ” occurring, it might be that the extreme unlikelihood of Tristan’s even being alive is somehow keeping her charged as long as he continues to breathe.

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  9. asazernik's avatar asazernik

    The idea of zunyan Song puts about has echoes of Mohist “impartial care”, recast to be more explicitly egalitarian.

    Makes sense that she gets along so well with Angharad: they both live by codes with explicit, rigid rules and principles. Maryam and Tristan seem to structure their morality more around personal loyalties.

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  10. Nobody's avatar Nobody

    >>Far from offended, Abrascal’s face creased in amusement at her dismissal. It was discomforting how untroubled he seemed by everything, and how closely that matched the Fangzi Yongtu’s description of a man with rules but no principles. You will know them thus: they neither exalt nor condemn, wandering the land without knowledge of the righteous and unrighteous. Like animals they will feed on benefits and flee calamity, heeding no dignity but their own.

    Swing and a miss. Tristian doesn’t heed his own dignity either, nor has he internalized any rules.

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      1. Nobody's avatar Nobody

        That’s more of a natural law than a rule. Different meaning of the word “law” in “Law of Rats.” That’s how I see it, anyway.

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  11. Dwalker120's avatar Dwalker120

    Song uses the term “Street Rat” as a derogatory term A LOT for someone who is also quoting philosophy about the dignity of all men. Hypocrisy is a bad look.

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    1. Rebeen's avatar Rebeen

      Hardly surprising though. While the Tianxi republics has the anti-monarchy/nobility egalitarian thing going on to a degree, they’rdpe also huffing heavily from austere virtue ethics and service to the state too. So even if they’re on the side of the common people in theory, they’d better be a loyal, hard working citizen who brushes his hair or you’re gonna have a bad time.

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  12. Nareik's avatar Nareik

    It’s kind of hilarious how Song is concerned about Tristan riding a potential calamity goddess when Angharad is contracted with the _Fisher_. Though Maryam might approve more of her knowing she’s the herald of the doom of Malan.

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